TheFairLady (Anonymous) on Feb 03, 2012 12:32 pm (
Losing My Way)
I love this story! The sexual tension is killing me
Nsyncilicous85 (Anonymous) on Jan 30, 2012 08:10 am (
Unthinkable)
OOOh CLIFFHANGERRR!!! love it girlie!!! I can't WAIT for the next update!! ANTICIPATION!
TheFairLady (Signed) on Jan 28, 2012 02:41 am (
Unthinkable)
Ugggh. GET IT TOGETHER JUSTIN! Please update soon. I'm dying over here! LOL
TheFairLady (Signed) on Jan 28, 2012 02:22 am (
Chapter 4)
I liked the lyrics!!!!!
Nichole (Anonymous) on Jan 25, 2012 04:45 am (
Chapter 9)
loving it so far. great update. Justin is falling in love with Kris and Kris needs to see she is setting her goals for the perfect man really high. til next time
Nichole (Anonymous) on Jan 21, 2012 02:56 pm (
Fool For You)
Kris gave Justin some much needed adviced and hopefully he will listen. great update.
Nsyncilicous85 (Anonymous) on Jan 21, 2012 02:02 pm (
Fool For You)
Love, love, LOVE, this story!!! I hope something happens between Justin and Kristina soon!!! Keep it up girlie!! Can't wait for the next update.
Nikki (Anonymous) on Jan 19, 2012 05:43 pm (
If Only For One Night)
Great job thus far.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I hope you keep reading!
Nichole (Anonymous) on Jan 19, 2012 01:13 pm (
If Only For One Night)
i'm reading and enjoying please up date soon. Khris and Justin are cute together. great update.
You should never have to convince yourself that you are in love justin you just know.
Author's Response: Thank you for continuing to read! Im glad you're enjoying it. Poor Justin, he should know that by now lol
Nichole (Anonymous) on Jan 17, 2012 04:53 am (
Chapter 1)
Hey love the new story. It's very interseting please continue and update. So many stories start but never get finished. Great job.
Nikki (Anonymous) on Jan 12, 2012 05:54 pm (
Chapter 1)
I may not update often but I'm reading. You're doing a great job so give me more updates.
Nikki (Anonymous) on Jan 09, 2012 08:51 am (
Chapter 1)
I think 3 and 4 are duplicates?
Author's Response: Thanks for noticing that, I had no idea! I went ahead and posted the real chapter 4.
TheFairLady (Signed) on Dec 30, 2011 10:15 pm (
Chapter 1)
What a great start! Can't wait to read more.
a_moments_grace (Signed) on Dec 30, 2011 05:43 pm (
Chapter 1)
Great start. I love new Justin stories!
If I can offer some friendly advice...you switch from first person narration (where Kristina is talking directly to the audience) and then move to third person (where the narrator is talking about the girls) and it gets a little confusing. It would help the story flow if you stuck with all first person or all third person. I would be happy to help you out with it, or you can hit up some of the other authors on the site. There are a lot of cool people willing to beta for you :)
I can't wait to see where you take this!
joaane (Anonymous) on Dec 30, 2011 04:38 pm (
Chapter 1)
I like it! Keep the chapters coming.......
