DiamondDoss (Signed) on Dec 09, 2014 10:48 pm (Chapter 1)
Okay so just Wow. Awesome job with this, I love seeing writers who can make a simple drabble so powerful.


acciolovesong (Signed) on Nov 01, 2012 08:50 pm (Chapter 1)
Beautiful job, gal :) Wow, I love the simiplicity of it. How you took one simple detail and built a little scene around it. i think it works as a one chapter story. 


DossboughtmeDiamonds (Signed) on Sep 12, 2012 09:32 pm (Chapter 1)

Wow, great short piece. :)



creativechaos (Signed) on Jan 12, 2012 09:30 pm (Chapter 1)
Who in the world would divorce JC with vows like those? Who would cheat on him with their personal trainer? So good, sad yes, but still so good!

Author's Response: thank you so much! :) 


lykeoilnwater (Signed) on Jan 12, 2012 02:54 am (Chapter 1)

*gasp* This took my breath away; seriously, it was heart wrenching but in the best way possible! His vow is what got to me most; those are the most beautiful words a man can say to a woman, & yet she's lost sight of them. So sad! But I enjoyed this greatly. Great work!



Author's Response: thank you! i had to go for that gut wrenching moment to make it work.. that impact.. 


Whit1210 (Signed) on Jan 07, 2012 10:37 pm (Chapter 1)
Sooo good!!!  Great job, hun!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!!


theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jan 07, 2012 03:47 pm (Chapter 1)
:(  How sad, but a good little drabble. I liked it. Nice job.

Author's Response: i know... kinda sad... thank you, though


Musiccrazedjazzy (Anonymous) on Jan 07, 2012 12:36 pm (Chapter 1)
This is great, sad, but great.

Author's Response: i know... kinda sad... thank you though.


JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Jan 07, 2012 11:50 am (Chapter 1)
Loved it!

Author's Response: thanks girlie!!


MissM (Signed) on Jan 07, 2012 08:03 am (Chapter 1)
Perfect. PERFECT!!!

Author's Response: thank you thank you! :)




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