Comments For The Beautiful Ones
the fresh princess (Signed) on Jun 16, 2012 06:08 pm (exes in paris)
I love this story, I really really do. Justin and Mila are so good together but in a bad way? I don't know what it is but I just like them man. I live for yor updates, please do it again sooooon!!!

Author's Response: Well thank you so much! And I agree, JuMila is kind of awesome in an odd, you-guys-shouldn't-be-together-but-I-wish-you-were sort of thing, right? I get it! And I live for your feedback, so again, gracias! It means a lot, seriously. <3



Tina (Anonymous) on Jun 16, 2012 11:27 am (exes in paris)
I can't get enough of this story. I demand more. :)

Author's Response: Well, my dear, your demand is my command! Thank you so much, by the way!



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Jun 15, 2012 10:06 pm (exes in paris)
Ooohh...you know, I think I liked getting to see a little bit more of these two together.  You do such a fantastic job of creating these characters as people, it's interesting to watch them navigate all of this.  And the song...perfect fit!  I'm in love with this story ;)

Author's Response: Awwww, thank you so much! I really enjoy writing them together. (Especially since I wanted them together for real for real, but whatever. I'm not mad!) So yeah, I try to create something at least halfway as interesting as the image I'd conjured of them in real life. So again, I appreciate that. I'm in love with you being in love with this story! <3



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Jun 12, 2012 05:19 pm (i'm not your babe)

Ohhh, Alex is one crazy bitch.  Really, I'm pretty excited that Nadia kicked her out, although, that last comment has me a little worried.  But...kudos for kicking out the crazy!

Loved it :) 



Author's Response: Alex is crazy, indeed, but what does that say about Nadia for putting up with her that long! LOL. I'm excited with you, because really, it just makes room for Justin... but then again, I can't have anything go well for too long. So yayyy, mystery!



jjazz59 (Anonymous) on Jun 11, 2012 03:32 pm (i'm not your babe)
Nadia and Alex really have a toxic relationship. Nadia should have cut Alex loose a long time ago. Now she is a leech in more ways than one. Their relationship is not going to end well. Missed Justin is this chapter. You are doing such a great job with this story!

Author's Response: Oh yes, they do! Toxic is the perfect word for it. And Nadia probably never should have gotten involved with her in the first place, but oh, the silly things we do when we have a chance at love! LOL. But yeah, it's looking a little bleak for the two of them. But that just leaves room for Justin, so yay! And thank you so much, as always!



toesinthesand (Anonymous) on Jun 11, 2012 10:54 am (i'm not your babe)
Oh my gosh this alex girl is too too much.... i don't even know how Nadia put up with her that long!! i am glad she seems to be into this thing with justin but I just get the feeling alex is going to try something crazy she seems like she doesn't have it all together haha. Pms i love it!!!!

Author's Response: She is a handful, isn't she? But I think it's safe to say Nadia has her own issues, sooo. Yeah! As for Alex coming between Justin and Nadia, well... I still haven't decided how I'm handling that, so you very well could be right lmao. We shall see!



SJane (Signed) on Jun 10, 2012 04:40 pm (i'm not your babe)
aaahhhhh i knew it *does happy dance*.... Alex seems like a very naive clingy girl definately gotta hall ass away from her nadia

Author's Response: Lmao you did, indeed. Congratulations! And you're also right about Alex, she's got a whole boatload of issues that mayyy not bode well for Nadia in the future!



jjazz59 (Anonymous) on Jun 04, 2012 03:24 pm (love connection)
Such a good chapter, Ashley. I am loving that Nadia is a bit unsure of herself and a bit jealous of Mila. While she is waiting for Justin to come back she can resolve her relationship with Alex.

Author's Response: Well thank you kindly! Yeah, I think it's important to relay that no one is without insecurities, even if they're trying to make it seem like they don't care. Usually, there's something behind that. And you're right, Nadia has a few other issues to resolve before she and Justin can move full steam ahead, sooo I'll see if I can get on that lol. Thanks a billion for the review!



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Jun 03, 2012 07:01 pm (alejandra)
Okay...so I think I accidentally skipped this chapter.  But...I'm not so sure I like this Alex chick.  She's strikes me as a jealous nag.  Justin is WAY better for Nadia.  Really.  I know these things ;)

Author's Response: Lmao I love you for reviewing backwards, that's awesome. And yeahhh, Alex has some "issues," if you will, so she may be one of those things that get in the way. Maybe. But I think you might be right in your assessment, so I will see what I can do about the whole Justin & Nadia thing, but... I make no promises!



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Jun 03, 2012 12:18 pm (love connection)

I want to be on a radio show now.  They make it seem like such awkward fun.  And I'm really happy that Justin's getting a little more....aggressive...with his approach with Nadia.  I want them to hook up ;)  just a suggestion, you know, in case you needed some ideas!!

Loved it, girly! 



Author's Response: LOL awkward and fun is precisely what I was going for! Yay! I feel like it probably wouldn't be a bad day to spend my mornings! And yeah, Justin's definitely trying to get this party started. Though I can't promise that nothing else gets in their way. ;) But I will always keep suggestions in mind, even if I don't necessarily use them lmao. Thanks, boo!



jjazz59 (Anonymous) on May 29, 2012 05:40 pm (alejandra)
Interesting chapter and certainly explains some things. Alex must know that Nadia is going to find out Justin came by. How is she going to get out of that one?

Author's Response: Yeah, I hoped it would at least begin to explain some stuff lol. And there'll be more to come! Also, Alex's crimes will definitely be addressed. You can't just go around lying to people and expect to not answer for it! For shame lol. Again, thank you so much for reviewing! <3



a_moments_grace (Signed) on May 28, 2012 04:30 pm (drive)
I have just managed to catch up on these, and I have to tell you that I need more, STAT!  Such a fantastic mess, it's so hard not to love them all for their absolute craziness.  The characters are so human, it's great.  Amazing writing.  I can't wait for more :)

Author's Response: YAY, you're back! I am so glad you like it, and although I can't do STAT, I can try something like RPSIP. (If you're wondering, that's Really Pretty Soon, I Promise.) And god, thank you so much. It is a mess, indeed, but I do try to give it some semblance of fantasticness lmao. And human characters... ahhhhhh, I feel like crying. What an awesome compliment. Thank you, thank you, a million times, thank you! <333



the fresh princess (Signed) on May 26, 2012 05:22 pm (drive)
Oh my damn Justin and Mila were crazy! I don't know what to think about that but girl you got me loving this. A part of me wants to see what he does with Nadia but I am loving the parts with him and Mila. Update soon - I need more more more

Author's Response: LOL. Yeah, they were a little batshit, weren't they? But I am so glad you dig it, their crazy escapades aside! I think I feel similarly, I have some weird soft spot for JuMila (maybe because it never happened for me in real life?), but Nadia's badass, right? So many decisions to make before I end this! Sigh. But yay, I'm glad you're on the ride with me!



jjazz59 (Anonymous) on May 26, 2012 05:02 pm (drive)
Another really good chapter. Looks like she might give Justin a chance. Knowing how you like to keep us in suspense I know things aren't going to go smoothly. That's why I like your writing so much. You sure have a way of leaving me wanting more.

Author's Response: Gracias, mamacita! Yeah, it does look like she's going to give him a chance. But yup, you know how I do -- so many things can go wrong, and given my history, you are absolutely right in assuming that something will. LOL. And I truly can't say thank you enough. Every encouraging word keeps me going from one chapter to the next. So I'll do my best not to leave you wanting for too long!



Anonymous (Anonymous) on May 26, 2012 01:35 pm (pressing engagements)
I'm in love with this story!! I can't wait to find out what's  going on with Nadia ..

Author's Response: Well thank you so much! I can't wait to tell you what's going on with Nadia! Well I can, that's part of the fun, but I can't wait for you to find out, too! LOL.





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