Emmie (Signed) on Jun 13, 2012 10:37 am (Chapter 15)
Omg I can't believe she's pregnant! Love the story and I also loved the deferent to 50 shades. I love those books by the way lol



Megan (Anonymous) on Jun 13, 2012 12:21 am (Chapter 15)
YAY!!!! :) so happy! This chapter was freakin awesome, every single bit of it! Can't wait to read more! :)



Megan (Anonymous) on Jun 11, 2012 11:36 pm (Chapter 14)
Haha too funny with Big'un wanting to be apart of the talent show...maybe GET some talent before you help out. Oh and how freakin sweet that Sutton is calling JC daddy now :). Also, YAY that Chris is coming and that James is accepting her and JC's relationship now and that she is willing to let their relationship progess further :). And at the end, sad how Clay the wonder man is treating Anna. :(. Great update, cant wait to read more!



theusagirl (Signed) on Jun 11, 2012 08:18 pm (Chapter 14)

Poor Anna.. :( She was so happy about the baby..so sad..

Now on a lighter note, AWW YAY! Chris is coming for a visit! :D I lubz him, he's so awesome..and his gf's name is Stephanie huh?? LOL Aww..I wondered what we argued about?? ;)

And I love that James is beginning to open up to JC more, a teeny bit, though I liked the part of the heated makeout session and all those hugs and lovies.. *happy sigh*

This is good, thanks for the update.. :)




mollyanna5 (Signed) on Jun 11, 2012 11:18 am (Chapter 14)
Yay! Chris is coming to town! Any chance he'll meet a lady friend too?? :) Thanks for updating!



theusagirl (Signed) on Jun 08, 2012 09:57 pm (Chapter 13)

Awww.. *hugs* Yes James, everything would be okay.. :)

I like the story she chose for JC to read to Sutton, "The Giving Tree" such a good book to read, and aww Sutton wants to call JC "dad" now..thats really sweet.. *tear.

Now, as for Claydoh..I mean, um Clay..lolz Hmm..he owns a construction place now, pssh. That's right, sign those papers..

And I'm glad that James had found her dream house, and JC approves, but she's probably gonna hold that off until everything is settled.. :)

Nicely done, and thanks for the update..




Megan (Anonymous) on Jun 07, 2012 03:30 pm (Chapter 13)
Oh goodness how I love this story! Its kinda like something out of a fairy tale. I think JC and James getting a house together is a great idea, then JC wanting to adopt Sutton and now she asked him if she could call him dad. Oh how freaking sweet. Can't wait to read more! :)



theusagirl (Signed) on May 31, 2012 08:40 pm (Chapter 12)

YAY! A talent show, that is what just what the town needs.. :) I love that Kaylie is still starstruck of JC, tee hee..and lolz when she was sending massive texts on her phone..and be like "OMG squee*

And yes I agree, JC needs to cool his jets for now, and think about the talent before proposing to James, and that way he can have a clear head just before he talks to that deadbeat dad of Sutton..that is, if he's around.

Lastly, I like how Chad explains things to him, you go dude.. ;)

Nice chapter and thanks for the update..




mollyanna5 (Signed) on May 31, 2012 08:22 pm (Chapter 12)
I adore JC and Sutton's relationship. I hope Chad's family is more accepting... excellent job :)



theusagirl (Signed) on May 29, 2012 08:16 pm (Chapter 11)

OOh house hunting.. :D Hmm..we'll see how that goes.

I like the part where JC was singing out loud, and the people around him were listening. Tee hee..too cute.

I also like how happy Sutton was when she saw him..awws. :)

Nicely done, and thanks for the update.




twilight eyes (Anonymous) on May 27, 2012 10:52 pm (Chapter 10)
Love it! I am in love with this story, just one request! Plleeeeaaasssssse put some major chapters in before tuesday, I have a flight so I need something to read while I'm in the air port lol!

Author's Response:

I should have a new chapter out by tomorrow night and will try to have two out by the time you leave ;)

AB 




Megan (Anonymous) on May 27, 2012 10:33 pm (Chapter 10)
Awwwww I love fluffy chapters! Kinda rude of Chad to tell Sutton that stuff but Im glad that James and Chad talked and everything is good now. Also the conversation between JC and Sutton on the phone was super cute! Can't wait to read about these 3's reunion. :)

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed ;) More soon!



theusagirl (Signed) on May 27, 2012 09:34 pm (Chapter 10)

AWW! JC and James are looking forward into seeing eachother again, and Sutton too..awws. This is just too cute.. :)

Now, this whole set of lines here:

He'd dated models and actresses but most of them had been shallow and had only satisfied him physically. They were hard to talk to because of the wall they'd put up on the first date, except when the date was nearly over and then they'd start the process of seducing. This usually led to a second date and maybe a third, but it wore off because there was nothing but physical attraction, no depth, no hope of a decent conversation. With James, he had immediately felt like he could be open and honest with her about any and everything. This unexpected woman had changed him for the good.

I totally agree on that, sometimes the girls that he actually dates, don't even care for him, just want him physically. That's sad.. :(

But anyway, this is good, thanks for the update. :)



Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed ;)



AmberW (Signed) on May 26, 2012 01:36 am (Chapter 10)
love love love the whole thing!!



theusagirl (Signed) on May 23, 2012 07:59 pm (Chapter 9)

*dun dun dun* These lines here: "At home." James suddenly, for reasons she couldn't explain, felt jealous and lonely. He was out in L.A. with his friends eating at some hip California joint she imagined, and she was stuck at home on the couch. I know how that feels *sad sigh* *eats bowl of ice cream* Though I tend to think positive thoughts..lolz.

Thats right, don't think that way James, JC won't do that, but man, the pilot was rescheduled...hmm. I'm sure she'll understand..hopefully. :)

Nicely done, and thanks for the update.






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