Anonymous (Anonymous) on May 23, 2012 05:43 pm (
Chapter 9)
Ugh JC fire your manager for taking you from James. Sometimes I want to slap JC in these fanfics and real life. haha cant wait for the next chapter. best part was the coversation between madison and kaylie.
mollyanna5 (Signed) on May 23, 2012 10:53 am (
Chapter 9)
You are evil ending it there and leaving us hanging!
Megan (Anonymous) on May 23, 2012 12:09 am (
Chapter 9)
Uh oh...trouble in paradise for James and JC? I certainly hope not, I would really hate to see these 2 broken apart because of their seperation. Thanks for the update, can't wait to read more :)
Megan (Anonymous) on May 21, 2012 01:54 am (
Chapter 8)
Oh goodness...what an update! I just love seeing these 2 together, props to James for being brave and letting JC go back to LA to tape that pilot and see if he misses his life back there. But gosh! These 2 are meant for each other!! And that moment with JC and Sutton on his bed was tooooo cute...*sniffle*. Thanks for updating and can't wait to read more! :)
Anonymous (Anonymous) on May 21, 2012 12:03 am (
Chapter 8)
James is nuts. I'm with chad on that notion. Plus that's really quick to be in a deep committed relationship, but hey it's fiction anything can happen. :) I can't wait for the next chapter.
mollyanna5 (Signed) on May 20, 2012 09:31 pm (
Chapter 8)
OMG, you can't end it there!!! More SOON! pleeeaasse?
theusagirl (Signed) on May 20, 2012 09:24 pm (
Chapter 8)
grabs Kleenex tissues* Sometimes when you love someone, you have to let them go, it'll make the bond grow a bit stronger.. :) This was a really good chapter, loved every piece of it. The part where JC didn't wanna leave James alone with Sutton, was sad. But she
told him to go, and lolz Chad, calling her crazy, I like him, he's awesome. :D
Now, these lines here: "I want to wake up like this every morning," JC kissed her ear and then her cheek as she rolled off of him. "Can we do that?" Yes JC, we can do that, *happy sigh* Oh how beautiful and romantic, it warms my heart so..
Nicely done, and thanks for the update.
P.S I wrote some stories myself, I'm still new at this writing thing though, but maybe when you have the time, you can read/review them..thankies. :)
theusagirl (Signed) on May 18, 2012 08:30 pm (
Chapter 7)
*screams at pillow* I'm okay..lolz she FELL for him, heck I did, well I still love the man, cause he's like..*swoons*
Ok, ok, um. I agree with what James said, JC might leave, but, maybe just maybe, he can stay, so lets take this "one step at a time." Don't worry James, I'm sure JC will never hurt you, unlike that football guy freak..hmph.
Oh, I also like all the kisses and hugs and just..GUH! And I like the respect they have for eachother of not going further.
Great job and thanks for the update. ;)
Megan (Anonymous) on May 18, 2012 03:15 pm (
Chapter 7)
I am in love with this story!!! So cute to see the blossoming relationship between James and JC, can't wait to read more! :)
Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on May 18, 2012 02:56 pm (
Chapter 1)
Great first chapter, seems like this is going to be a good story. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
theusagirl (Signed) on May 17, 2012 08:19 pm (
Chapter 6)
WHOA! That was so terrible what happened to James, that BEAST, hmph. I'm so glad that she was able to tell JC about that ordeal, sometimes its good to tell people your problems, someone you can trust, but then, you have to know who to trust, I've been through my ups and downs, but I'm stronger now.. :) Completely different then this though.. And random since they are at the Shrimp Festival, a good song for this is "Lean on Me" or "Stand By Me" just a thought..since they are both making conversation..
And JC kissed her, was she expecting that kiss?? I must know! I hope it wasn't too sudden. GAH!
Great chapter..and thanks for the update.
P.S You don't have Twitter do you??
Musiccrazedjazzy (Anonymous) on May 17, 2012 09:44 am (
Chapter 6)
:O that was fantastic, cant wait to read more. I would have died laughing when big'un sang, either that or cried from the torture.
Tink (Signed) on May 17, 2012 03:16 am (
Chapter 6)
Great chapter, loving this story. hope you update again soon
theusagirl (Signed) on May 16, 2012 08:53 pm (
Chapter 5)
YAY! JC asked her out, *dances* lolz I liked the part where he blushed and felt embarassed..aww.. :D
Now, the part where you explained how James ex was Clay?? Hmph..he sounds awful, I'm so glad that he's out of her life, and I like that James is trying to get back on track on raising her daughter Sutton..
Looking forward to the date err..I mean, um "friendly outing." ;) b/tween these two..
Nicely done.. thanks for the update..
Author's Response: Love how much you love this story, girl! It makes me eager to write more!
AB
cali_meg07 (Signed) on May 15, 2012 11:27 pm (
Chapter 5)
Yay! Can't wait to see how their date goes. And I love that JC was nervous asking James out. :)
Author's Response: :D
