mollyanna5 (Signed) on May 15, 2012 10:27 pm (Chapter 5)
omg! omg! A date! For both of them! What's going to happen at Shrimp Fest???? More please :)   Updating makes my foot feel better! LOL

Author's Response: :D



theusagirl (Signed) on May 14, 2012 09:05 pm (Chapter 4)

Yes JC, you can find alot about a person in a month.. :) Ok, the thought of him watching "Dora the Explorer" with Sutton is just plain CUTENESS! AWW! "Ooh Swiper the Fox" haha..ok let me stop. lolz Anyway, I love that Sutton is comfortable around him as well, and James is seeing that.

And yes JC, pull your brakes before making moves on James, though she also finds him attractive. ;) yeaahh..

And lolz Chad complaining about the long lines at the store..haha.

This is good, I'm liking this story. Thanks for the updates. :D




theusagirl (Signed) on May 14, 2012 08:33 pm (Chapter 3)

LOL Kaylie freaked! I would probably would at first..I mean, if JC comes walking into a coffee shop and I'm there, I'll be like "silent squeal* Then I'll be like "Hi JC, nice to meet you." *nervous laughter*

But anyway, in the earlier scene, love Chad playing with Sutton tea party, Chad reminds me of my friend, he can be a goof ball..lolz awws, and can I just say that JC and kids=ADORABLE

I also like that James kept her cool when she met JC, :)

Nicely done.. *reads next chapter*



Author's Response:

I based Chad off of a really good friend from college...really goofy, but serious when needs to be.

Hope you are having a great night!

AB 




mollyanna5 (Signed) on May 14, 2012 05:26 pm (Chapter 4)
I'm glad JC got to meet Lane! Thanks for giving me something to read while my broken foot heals  :)

Author's Response: I hope your foot heals soon! But I'm glad I can give you entertainment :)
AB



mollyanna5 (Anonymous) on May 14, 2012 12:35 am (Chapter 3)
I specifically looked before I went to bed to check this story for an update, I was pleasantly surprised!! Thanks for the update. I just love this story.



cali_meg07 (Signed) on May 13, 2012 09:33 pm (Chapter 2)
Perfect set up! I can't wait for JC and James to meet! And I totally thought she was a boy the first time she was mentioned lol. Nice job!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!!

AB :) 




Anonymous (Anonymous) on May 13, 2012 07:50 pm (Chapter 2)
This is really good. Had to cringe at the girl who was freaking out about the show. Love the relationships both have with the people around them. This is going to be interesting to see what happens.

Author's Response:

Haha! I based Kaylie off of a girl I knew in high school. Glad you like it!

AB 




thesuagirl (Anonymous) on May 12, 2012 11:58 am (Chapter 2)

Let the vacation begin.. *clinks glass with JC*

LOL! Kaylie's reaction when ABDC got cancelled, the thought of JC not being a TV once a week kinda bothers me..I need my JC fix..lolz

But anyway, this is good. Thanks for the update.. ;)



Author's Response: :) Glad you are enjoying it!
AB



mollyanna5 (Anonymous) on May 12, 2012 10:44 am (Chapter 1)
Thanks for Ch. 2! I can't wait for JC to meet the coffee crew!



cali_meg07 (Signed) on May 12, 2012 12:15 am (Chapter 1)
Great first chapter! Hope you post more soon :)

Author's Response:

Hey thanks! Hope you like ch 2!

AB 



Author's Response:

Hey thanks! Hope you like ch 2!

AB 




Anonymous (Anonymous) on May 10, 2012 10:01 pm (Chapter 1)
This is good. I can already tell I'm going to be hooked. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks! More should be out tomorrow night! AB



mollyanna5 (Anonymous) on May 10, 2012 09:31 pm (Chapter 1)
Interesting beginning! More please :)

Author's Response: Hey thanks! More tomorrow night for sure :) AB



theusagirl (Signed) on May 10, 2012 08:05 pm (Chapter 1)

Thats right JC! You have a trip to plan! Ooh I like this. :D Ok, ok..hi you must be new to this site, I'm Steph by the way, and you must be Alysen. Welcome to the *NF world of *NSYNC.

Now, back to this. I like how you started this off, and put James and JC in separate places and timezones, so cool. James friend is Chad, and Chad is JC's cousin, meaning James is gonna meet JC..ahh!

Nicely done though.. :)



Author's Response: Hey Steph! Thanks so much for your feedback. It is greatly appreciated as I havent done ff in a long time. More out tomorrow night for sure :) have a great evening! AB





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