Nikki (Anonymous) on Aug 18, 2012 11:11 pm (One)

Betsy Collins has been living the good life since she met Preston Harrington two years ago, and up until now, she felt she was with him for all the right reasons.  Now, with a rock on her finger the size of the Hope Diamond, part of her is starting to feel like she could be making a mistake, even though her friends and family think she’s headed in the right direction.

Does the above look familiar? I just reread that and realized how you flipped the script and how this can 'somewhat' apply to Justin and Val.

Yessssssss, I knew it. You got me, throwing me for these loops but, no offense to Val, she sweet and all but Justin/Ava need 'time' together. Betsy needs time to get herself in order, too, so you already know how I feel.



Author's Response: I try...I do. So glad you liked what I did, and I hope you'll like the rest of it too!



Keediluv (Signed) on Aug 18, 2012 08:56 pm (Thirty-Six)

You are pure evil!!!!

I FUCKING LOVE YOU!!!!!

Team Betsy baby!!

Yay!!!

K, I'm done :D

Ki



Author's Response: LOL I Fucking love you too! Hahaha!



Kandi_28 (Anonymous) on Aug 18, 2012 08:36 pm (One)
I don't usually leave reviews but I am addicted to this story and I'm so glad that Justin comes to his senses about Val.  Betsy's the one for him :)

Author's Response: Aw well thank you for the review it is much appreciated! I agree...we'll have to see what his dumb butt decides to do lol.



Keediluv (Signed) on Aug 18, 2012 07:45 pm (Thirty-Five)

I thought I was the only one who thought that way about Val. She just has this thing about her that tells me she's never really been through anything before. Sweet girl, but she needs a dose of reality.  I love that Betsy's growth is becoming more apparent and that she's allowing herself to heal. I think its even crazier that she's still doing what she's always done...sacrificing herself for Justin's well being. That's why I will ALWAYS be Team Betsy baby!!!  Whoo hop! :D

Ki



Author's Response: nope you weren't :) and yes Team Betsy all the way whoo!! I love you chic!



Nikki (Anonymous) on Aug 18, 2012 05:11 pm (One)
Hmmmm, could Val be to Justin what Preston was to Betsy(minus the extreme psychotics). Muy interesante, chica.

Author's Response: Must. Read. Next. Chapter.



Tink (Signed) on Aug 18, 2012 03:27 pm (Thirty-Five)
Another great chapter, really don't want them to go through with the wedding though!

Author's Response: hmmm



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Aug 18, 2012 02:44 pm (Thirty-Five)

Aye, there's the rub!

I had a sneaky suspicion that something wasn't perfect with Val and we were going to see that sooner or later.  Now, though, it's if Justin sees is soon enough.  I don't want them to get married and move all the way to Boston just to have it blow up in their faces.

And, YES! BETSY IS BACK! I love the spunk we see in her again.  I hope she continues to get better :)

Love the update! 



Author's Response: YEs there are always tricks up my sleeve aren't there lol. And i'm excited she's back too. I heart her :) Thanks for reading, as always :)



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Aug 17, 2012 02:51 pm (Thirty-Four)

Oh man.  I feel like Justin was just starting to have things go smoothly in his life and he was happy.  Now, though...something is brewing and I don't like it!  

I love this story so much :)  I can't wait to see what happens. 




mollyanna5 (Signed) on Aug 17, 2012 11:20 am (Thirty-Four)
NO! Not Boston!  Thanks for the update :)

Author's Response: LOL thanks there's another one up for you now!



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Aug 16, 2012 05:40 pm (Thirty-Three)
Well that was a step in the right direction :)  I'm glad Justin was able to get through to her.  I hope that she's able to get the help she needs.  I want the old Betsy back, too!

Author's Response: Thanks! So do I! there's another chapter up for you now!



Nikki (Anonymous) on Aug 16, 2012 05:19 pm (One)

He's finally seen the light but it still irks me that it took someone else to point this out to him. Of all people, it was Val. Don't get me wrong, I don't dislike the girl but she's just in the midst of a terrible situation. I'm not going to lie, I won't be happy without a Justin/Betsy relationship finality...but if you so choose to end it w/ Justin/Val, I'll just have to deal. Just happy that he now acknowledges that she sacrificed such a great deal(herself) for him.



Author's Response: I know...it's a confusing situation.  In fact, when I orginally started this story I had no intention of doing all of this stuff with Preston/ Valerie.  It sort of just happened but It hink I know what direction I'm taking now.  I really appreciate all the feedback though, it means a lot to me!



Tink (Signed) on Aug 16, 2012 03:56 pm (Thirty-Three)
Loved this update, so happy she is getting help. Still want Betsy and Justin together but I like Val too! Can't wait to read more

Author's Response: Thanks Tink! There's another chapter up now!



Keediluv (Signed) on Aug 16, 2012 02:25 pm (Thirty-Three)

I think I've given you the wrong impression and for that, I'm sorry. I love that the story is writing itself and you know I think you are the absolute bees knees! I just got hooked on an idea and it's hard to shake sometimes. If Val makes him happy, that's awesome. You write what you feel and know that I'll love and support you and it always. Glad she's going for help and thanks for allowing Justin to admit the truth. I needed to see that :D

Ki



Author's Response: No no don't be sorry! Please! It's my epic flaw, putting twists in my stories and I hate myself for it sometimes.  I love you too!



mollyanna5 (Signed) on Aug 16, 2012 11:57 am (Thirty-Two)
Amazing story so far :)

Author's Response: Thank you!



SJane (Signed) on Aug 16, 2012 03:42 am (Thirty-One)
i dont know if its just me but i am really loving Justin and Val. I mean yeah him and Betsy didn't really have a moment to find their 'niche' so to speak but i like how Val fits into the family.

Betsy at this point?...i dont know i just really dont. I know she went through some rough shit dont get me wrong but i'm kind of at a loss with her at the moment.

Author's Response: Yeah they definitely didn't find their Niche at all.  I'm glad you are loving Val though, I kind of love her too.  There is another chapter waiting for you! Enjoy :)





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