My goodness ladies!!!
This story is all out frickin fantastic!!! I will say, reading this over the last week has had me all over the place but man, this is too good for words! I love that their relationship grew the way it did but gal, you sent me through on this intense Devon chapters. And the sex....shit lol!
Chloe is pure awesome!
Ki
P.S- Please, please, please let him come home safe :)
Author's Response: It's coming! Sorry. As you know, there's a lot going on with our characters and we want to make sure it's as close to perfect as possible before we post. Check back this time next week, we should have something up for you :)
This story is so good! Just finished the last chapter and looking forward to more! Way to go, girls!
Alysen B. :)
Ugh I didn't need this to end. This chapter was just too good. Justin...listen to your dad! I'm sure it's hard to talk about, but getting pinned down and chocked must not be so easy either. Either he talks or Morgan leaves. He may make her feel safe, and I know he wouldn't intentionally hurt her, but she has a history with someone who has been violent to her in the past after claiming to care for her and I'm sure she can only take so much more. She knows he wouldn't intentionally hurt her and that he has some issues he's dealing with but she can't be there for him if he won't speak, and she can't know how much he cares for her if he doesn't speak. She can't feel content and secure if she's afraid he's going to have another nightmare and hurt her again. He needs to talk so she can understand where he is coming from and how his time in the battlefields has made him feel. His silence is keeping them from growing closer and actually defining who they are. No matter how much each of them cares for each other they can't move forward if there is no communication. I feel sad for Justin. He helps so many others but with this I'm sure he feels completely helpless. Anyway, moving on to happier things like part A and part of B, I love the describing of how their bodies fit together and the intimacy they have just being together watching tv or sleeping. The little touches he gives her throughout the story...my heart melts. And go Morgan for taking control! you go girl! lol i loved that. Ohmygosh what if she handcuffed him and he lost his dang mind in shock and pleasure!??!? can yall make that happen before its over? Lol or him her. Whatever. I just need handcuffs involved now. Lol My heart screamed for joy when he beat up Devon! Lol I was like already Freddy! Now what?! Now what?!? Lol but I know that's not the end of him and I'm afraid of what it will take to get rid of him. And what about when justin leaves?? Which he hasn't told Morgan about...listen to your dad justin! *sigh* I absolutely love this story. Please post more soon!! :o)
Author's Response: I'm been a horrible Nsync/JT fan lately. Been so busy, I haven't had time to listen to any of his new songs :-( *runs, hides, waits for the all clear to come out* But, after your comment I googled the lyrics, and I can definitely see why you'd have that in mind, lol. The similarities between JT and my Marine just don't stop!