Comments For Semper Fidelis
Ash (Anonymous) on Apr 18, 2016 05:42 pm (Epilogue - Part II)
I've read this whole story about 4 times and I love it even more each time. Can we get a sequel? Even if its just one chapter lol
MochaB (Signed) on Feb 24, 2015 05:14 pm (Epilogue - Part II)
So it only took me over a year to finally read the last chapter of this amazing story. Life got in the way when it was finished. I didn't want to read the end anyway cause that would mean it was over. Lol but then life continued to get in the way and before I knew it many months had passed but I always kept thinking about it. Now I've had a chance to go back and read it all over again and finally read the epilogue and I'm so sad its over, but so happy it ended on a happy note. I was seriously going to leave an angry review if y'all didnt give it a happy ending. Lol! But I can't say enough how much I absolutely love this story. Love, love, LOVE. These are some of my favorite characters, and I loved this portrayal of Justin. The good, the bad, the incredibly sexy....loved every bit of his character. And I just loved Morgan and Chloe. Anyway, I loved reading the letters they wrote to each other. To me there's just something about a hand written letter that allows honesty and true feelings to flow freely. And I love how Justin was true to his word and he was honest about everything, the good and bad. How he felt about Morgan and missing his girls...swoon. Chloe calling his Dad...ugh my heart. Anyway, again I can't say how much I love this story. Now that I've finally completed it I'm going to go back and read all the goodness over again. Lol y'all ended it perfectly. Serge with his sexy self. I am enjoying reading B-Twice stories she has going. Im glad she approched you, Coffee, to do this story. Coffee, I hope you give us another amazing story soon. I often go back and read your older stories cause I just love them and your writing so. If y'all want to give us a couple of shorts to go along with this story I certainly wouldn't mind. Just throwing that out there. ;o) I also hope that your Marine is safe and sound Coffee. Ugh. So sad it's over (or that I've finished it) but so happy it exists. Thanks again ladies! :o)
elle-miranda (Signed) on Oct 16, 2014 05:32 pm (Epilogue - Part II)
Wow, Ladies! You wrote an amazing story. I love, love, LOVED it! Morgan and Justin were so sweet and real, and Chloe was just an absolute hoot. Also, as a former MilSo, I was so impressed with how you beautifully captured all of the emotions associated with deployments and all of the things that happen when you're in love with a military man. I so totally loved this story. Bravo!
Chrissy (Anonymous) on Apr 09, 2014 05:43 pm (Epilogue - Part II)
This story was everything!!!!!! Sequel?
jjazz59 (Anonymous) on Dec 24, 2013 06:57 pm (Epilogue - Part II)
What a beautiful story and a beautiful ending. Looking forward to reading more from you two!
Nikki (Anonymous) on Dec 20, 2013 10:00 pm (Epilogue - Part II)
When I saw that this story was completed, my heart skipped a beat. I saw, then finally read the last (2) chapters, I became happy, sad and several other emotions all in one. I absolutely love this story and, though, sad to see it end, I think it ended on a perfectly nice note. I know I'll be re-reading this story, just to read it altogether. This is up there with the top pieces of fan fiction that I've read. Great job, ladies...awesome sauce.
MyaLovesJt4Ever (Signed) on Nov 16, 2013 11:47 pm (Prologue)
I love this story so much! You're a really good writer too. I started crying so much after the part when a kid asked her who Justin was and she said her dad. From there on, I was a wreck. This is one of the best stories I've read. And please update soon! Thank you
MochaB (Signed) on Oct 04, 2013 09:02 pm (Chapter 10 Part B)
Oh don't mind me. I'm just bawling my freaking eyes out over here runny nose and all. I think that pretty much sums up how I feel about this chapter. And Chloe calling Justin daddy??? Ohmygoodness. *cries some more* this was just a bittersweet chapter. I don't know anybody in the Milso community so I had never known about this prayer, but its a beautiful prayer. I can't wait to read what happens next as they both go through their different battles ahead. Y'all have to bring Justin back home. HAVE TO. Please, please, please. Update soon!
MochaB (Signed) on Oct 04, 2013 04:11 pm (Chapter 10 Part A)
Wow. Ok. I had to review before moving on to Part B because this was a heavy chapter. I was so sad while Justin was reliving Chad's death, but then when he told Chloe...the tears came. That was so hard to read. I know this is a story, but Cloe is smart just like kids in real life. They pick up on so much and understand things we don't realize they do. Her being scared for her mom...She may not fully understand why he's leaving but she knows what can happen when he does. Her begging him to to go...heartbreaking. I love Chloe and Justin's relationship. I'm happy Justin was finally open to Morgan about what's been going on with him and why he behaves like he's been. So happy Morgan didn't give up on him too. He did make promises and I know he plans to keep them. He even internally admitted to loving her! I knew he loved Chloe, and figured he cared deeply for Morgan but for him to admit it to himself...Ugh my heart. Wonder when he will tell her. Anyway loved this chapter even though it made me sad. Lol I'm glad he spoke to Wilson about things. And I'm sure I've said this before but y'all have to make this story have a happy ending. I am begging the crap out of y'all to give this story a happy ending. I don't think I could take it if it ended bad. Lol I'm definitely not ready for it to be over yet, but I just thought I'd go ahead and get my request in. Lol off to Part B!
Pinky (Anonymous) on Sep 30, 2013 06:49 pm (Chapter 10 Part B)
I NEED MORE!!! This story is sooo good.
alee_92 (Signed) on Sep 12, 2013 06:06 pm (Chapter 10 Part B)
OMG!!!!! She called him daddy!! That is the sweetest and cutest thing ever. Lol I thought he was going to propose...I am absolutely in love with this story and the characters!!!! Can't wait for the next update!
Nichole (Anonymous) on Sep 12, 2013 03:33 am (Chapter 10 Part B)
You guys nailed it. Iam a military wife of 20 years(Navy). The deployment are hard and they are getting longer for all branches. I feel sometimes its hard to explain to others who are not spouses or girlfriends/boyfriends, or family members just how hard the separation is to those left behind. Oh and Chole's reaction was spot on. Our kids take really hard when mommy or daddy have to leave them and they tend to act out. But you two made it realistic. My friend who is a marine spouse read this and was like "are they living my life." great update. til later
Jasmine (Anonymous) on Sep 11, 2013 03:04 pm (Chapter 10 Part B)
Love this story. This chapter broke my heart.
Tink (Signed) on Sep 10, 2013 05:03 am (Chapter 10 Part B)
Love this story. This chapter was so sad though!! Hope you update again soon