charleeene (Signed) on Aug 03, 2016 02:22 am (
Chapter 29 part 1)
Ah Billy Joel and NSYNC... These are a few of my favorite things.
Author's Response: I love Billy Joel as well! I've heard he's excellent in concert. I am loving your reviews and that you're enjoying this story a86;a039;
charleeene (Signed) on Aug 03, 2016 02:01 am (
Chapter 28 part 2)
Uugh, excuse my language but Kristen's a bitch from hell.
charleeene (Signed) on Jul 31, 2016 06:21 pm (
Chapter 25)
As much as I love Mel and Joey, I'm kind of hoping that there was more to the kiss that she and Chis shared. At least for a small part of the story. He could be the guy that cherishes her just as much as Joey did.
charleeene (Signed) on Jul 31, 2016 12:38 am (
Chapter 22)
Ahh, I cringed when Joey said "Love you, too" to Kristen! :(
charleeene (Signed) on Jul 29, 2016 11:54 pm (
Chapter 19)
Oh my goodness. This chapter was so painful. My heart shattered for them :'(
charleeene (Signed) on Jul 24, 2016 01:04 am (
Chapter 15)
Holy toleedo! My jaw dropped and literally said "WHAAT?" with my hands on my face while I read the proposal part. I was not expecting that! Loving this story more and more with each chapter. Great work!
charleeene (Signed) on Jul 23, 2016 11:46 pm (
Chapter 14)
It makes me so happy that Joey and Mel are officially together. I was going nuts when they kept going back and forth. He's so sweet to her, I love it!
charleeene (Signed) on Jul 23, 2016 03:04 pm (
Chapter 10)
Great song choice at the end. I love Hall and Oates!
charleeene (Signed) on Jul 22, 2016 10:52 pm (
Chapter 7)
"Two plus two equals four," lol that part was great. I'm really enjoying this.
charleeene (Signed) on Jul 22, 2016 09:32 pm (
Chapter 4)
I didn't think I could feel so many emotions in a span of five minutes! I was practically clapping when they kissed. Loving it so far (:
charleeene (Signed) on Jul 22, 2016 08:45 pm (
Chapter 2)
I love the type of friendship Joey and Mel have. It gives me the butterflies. I also hope that Chris has more parts. I was practically laughing when I tried picturing him covering his mouth so that he wouldn't laugh out loud. Great story! I hope I don't zoom through it. I wanna make sure I take my time to enjoy it haha
charleeene (Signed) on Jul 22, 2016 07:54 pm (
Chapter 1)
I already knew I was going to enjoy this story just by reading through the first paragraph. Can't wait to read the rest!
Author's Response: Thank you! This was my first novel length story I'd written. It's a little cheesy in parts but I still love it. Let me know what you think.
TeamChasez (Signed) on Apr 28, 2014 08:27 am (
Epilogue)
*sobs uncontrolably into her hands* I think that story could have lasted another 100 or so chapters. (which I know you tried to do.)
Next up: Between Friends: Part Duex
"Why is it 'Between Friends'? Shouldn't it be 'Between Spouses'?"
"I'm not trading spouses...he's too hairy for my taste."
"Yeah, he's too skinny and boney for me."
"I think the first chapter should be Joey changing his first blow out diaper."
"Nah, that's Uncle Chris's job..."
TeamChasez (Signed) on Apr 28, 2014 06:28 am (
Chapter 36 part 1)
Put up the rest of this chapter, Yo! ;)
AceofSpades (Signed) on Jan 11, 2014 08:06 pm (
Epilogue)
FINALLY finished this. I loved Joey singing Beauty and the Beast at the end. This whole story was really great. Meliss and Joey are so cute together and I was hanging on until the end to see how things would end up for them. Definitely worth the award. :)
(This is MauveAvenger, btw, I changed my penname)
