Musiccrazedjazzy (Anonymous) on Jun 09, 2013 06:22 pm (
Chapter 12)
Awww i loved that she went to see him. Vocal rest? Haha this would be funny because we all know how jc rambles. Cant wait to see the next chapter.
musiccrazedjazzy (Signed) on May 28, 2013 10:02 pm (
Chapter 11)
ok I need a tissue after reading that. I love this story. I can't wait to read more. I love that his family is there for him. :D
creativechaos (Signed) on May 24, 2013 03:19 pm (
Chapter 11)
I finally got a chance to read what you had so far. Please keep going; with everything I've experienced and am still experiencing, now I'm emotionally attached to the story. You've done a fabulous job so far - I love it.
Author's Response: Thank you, Tish! My goal has been to make it seem realistic and I'm glad you think so. It feels good to know I'm helping someone else in the proccess of writing this. I have a good bit of the plot outlined. The only way this story won't get written is that life gets too busy. But I love writing it. I don't see myself not completeing this story.
mollyanna5 (Anonymous) on May 23, 2013 11:24 pm (
Chapter 11)
thanks for the update! I can't wait to see how he is when he wakes up!
Author's Response: Thank you, Molly :) He'll have trouble communicating with people. He'll have to think out of the box for awhile.
theusagirl (Signed) on May 22, 2013 08:39 pm (
Chapter 11)
Ok, from the top, I like these lines here: "He liked those intimate moments, just him and his voice. And that carried over into adulthood. He enjoyed getting to know a song’s intricacies privately before sharing it with the world. Tunes sometimes stayed in his head for days before he wrote them down. His voice was an integral part of writing songs, which in turn carried him through difficult phases. That is very true, sometimes he just pops out of nowhere and surprises us. :)
Now, the thought of JC undergoing surgery and saying he was scared is sad. :( I'm glad that all of his friends are family are there. I know he's gonna pull through this.. :)
Update soon! I must know what happens next..
Author's Response: Thank you, Steph :) I love how you tell me what parts you like. I like that little piece, too. It's how I feel while writing the story. I enjoy getting to know the plot and the characters before I share it with you all. I'm so happy you're enjoying it as much as I am.
DiamondDoss (Signed) on May 21, 2013 11:14 pm (
Chapter 11)
OH wow, Kristen. Great job, girl! So glad you updated and I hope you can keep your muses going. I bawled at the first when JC was going through his feelings and then when the 4 lackeys were there in the waiting room. :) More please.
Author's Response: I'm writing as fast as I can ;P I don't plan to stop writing this anytime soon. :) Aww, I'm glad you liked the guys waiting there. They meant it when they said they'd be there for him.
Soleridea (Signed) on May 12, 2013 04:04 am (
Chapter 10)
Omg, please continue this story! I can't wait to read more lol I'm so interested :D
Author's Response: Thank you for reading :) I'm happy you like it. welcome to the fandom and NSYNC Fiction. I plan to continue; it's just the matter of time and inspiration coming together.
mollyanna5 (Anonymous) on Apr 16, 2013 11:11 pm (
Chapter 10)
Chris is great!! Thanks for the update :) Beat cancer, JC!
theusagirl (Signed) on Apr 14, 2013 12:45 pm (
Chapter 10)
*tear Awww! This was a Kodak moment! All five guys together in one room, though the moment was interrupted by that goon Eric that randomly showed up..HMPH! Good for Chris and Joey to put a stop to him, go away Eric, shoo fly.. LOL
Now, these lines here: "This,” Lance motioned to everyone. “is brotherhood. We will always take care of one of our own.”
:) Thats right..I love their bond, always and forever..
Pretty good job on this, thanks for the update!
DiamondDoss (Signed) on Apr 14, 2013 05:25 am (
Chapter 10)
Oh man..I loved all the emotions in this. It is so great to read all five of them together and know they are all still there for JC. I am sure in real life it would be the same too. I hope Eric never comes back either. And I'm glad JC was able to talk to Justin and air out his feelings some. Can't wait for more.
theusagirl (Signed) on Mar 01, 2013 09:38 pm (
Chapter 9)
Who is it?? Is the rest of the guys?? Chris maybe??
Aww..this was a bittersweet chapter, I'm so glad that his family are there with him though, and I also like that Jenna is being so supportive for him.. :)
Good chapter, update soon! :)
DossboughtmeDiamonds (Anonymous) on Feb 27, 2013 07:47 am (
Chapter 9)
oh i loved the chat between Jenna and JC. And I had to keep from tearing up at his parents and siblings coming. then at the very end...are the guys there?? i want more!!! Great job!!
Tink (Signed) on Feb 27, 2013 06:02 am (
Chapter 9)
Great chapter, can't wait to read more
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Feb 27, 2013 01:17 am (
Chapter 9)
Ugh you just had to end it there? I want to know who it is. Please update soon. That is great that Jenna is there for him. :) I sense either a romance or a really tight friendship will form.
mollyanna5 (Signed) on Feb 27, 2013 12:53 am (
Chapter 9)
I loved it! I'm so glad Justin was supportive in the last chapter and Jenna is good for him. I can't wait for the next chapter :) Thank you for updating this touching story.
