theusagirl (Signed) on Nov 30, 2012 08:30 pm (
Chapter 4)
Oooh! This is a good chapter, I must know what happens next. I'm glad that his Jenna friend would like to accompany him for lunch though, and I also like that Matt is so understanding, better than Eric.
Thanks for the update.. :)
theusagirl (Signed) on Oct 27, 2012 09:33 pm (
Chapter 3)
Terminate the deal?? hmph! Those hoodlums..
Now, I hope the girl remembers him, if it is the girl that he talked to a few years ago, and Eric is like a shadow over JC, he needs to get away from him..lolz
I like these lines here: "Music had always been there through the hard times. He could channel his emotions into song and make something beautiful out of something painful.
And I hope you are feeling okay.. :) *hugs* This was a good chapter, thanks for the update..
mollyanna5 (Signed) on Oct 26, 2012 11:09 pm (
Chapter 3)
I hope she remembers him! thanks for the update :)
Musiccrazedjazzy (Anonymous) on Oct 05, 2012 05:32 pm (
Chapter 1)
I hate these type of conversations. Where all you want is someone to understand you and yet Eric being the dimwit he is does nothing. Love it can't wait for the next chapter.
theusagirl (Signed) on Oct 04, 2012 08:49 pm (
Chapter 2)
Eric.. *grumbles*
Even though the convo b/tween him and JC was kinda off, looks like Eric is strictly business, doesn't know how JC feels, and all that stuff. But at least JC has a music event to go, that may get his mind off of things..
Nicely done, thanks for the update.. :)
Megan (Anonymous) on Sep 22, 2012 09:37 pm (
Chapter 1)
I love this story so far :). I liked reading about JC's inner battle with himself to just get outta bed, I myself have struggled with depression over the past 10 years so I can relate to whats going on. Great story! Keep it up!!
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Sep 21, 2012 03:34 pm (
Chapter 1)
Thanks for explaining that. Ignore what I said earlier. I honestly don't know how you deal with your depression or how you feel, but I am glad you made this a story that helps us understand this I can't say illness and I can't say disease but either way its great that you are writing about it. I'm excited to see what's next.
roseinvisible (Signed) on Sep 20, 2012 06:30 pm (
Chapter 1)
It's been so long since I've read something worth continuing..
I'm glad I came across this.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm floored. You made my night :)
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Sep 18, 2012 11:43 am (
Chapter 1)
This is interesting, however it seems as if you're giving him a multiple personality disorder. It kind of confused me a bit when he was beating himself up. Other than that I'm curious as to where this is going.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! What makes you think that? I'm basing it off my own battle with clinical depression. My style is to show thoughts in italics. I'm sorry for confusing you. I hope you continue reading.
theusagirl (Signed) on Sep 17, 2012 09:15 pm (
Chapter 1)
This is SO GOOD! This story has me hooked already, I would LOVE to see how this goes.. :D
Looking forward to the next chapter.. *thumbs up*
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm glad you like it. I'm trying to iron on some more details. hopefully I'll update soon.
mixed-bag-of-tricks (Anonymous) on Sep 17, 2012 05:57 pm (
Chapter 1)
I really like your story so far. I'm intrigued. I can't wait until the next chapter and the rest of the story. Jenna reminds me of something I have thought about before.
Author's Response: Thank you :) I decided to play on that concept a little bit and see how it affects the dynammic.
