Ooh! "Finding Nemo"! "his name is squishy and he shall be mine." LOL sorry I had a moment.
Ahem..anyway from the top, OMG! the way Stephanie spoke to Lesly was so uncalled for! Though, I think Chris was supposed to tell Lesly already about Stephanie though, I mean, but maybe he just couldn't tell her cause of what was going on between her and everything. :( However, Lesly found out the hard way and she punched Chris's lights out..ouch.
Now, I would like to see where this goes next, will Chris head back to Orlando?? Oh but wait! This had me thinking, what if it isn't Chris's baby, and Stephanie is making all this up! OOh! This is good! Thanks for updating! :D
I'm waiting for the ball to drop between Lesley and Chris and how that mess gets cleaned up...
Great work so far!
Uh huh, yeah JC, lets make up for lost time.. ;)
But onto the sad news..poor Lesly, her dad passed away, that is so awful. :( And I like that Chris was there through everything, he was just about to tell her about Stephanie and the baby, but then the phone call happened.
Sad chapter..but thanks for updating.
Author's Response:
Still thinking about the 3rd installment. I'm open to suggestions ;)
Thanks for the review!
AB
Oh man.. :( I hope her dad is okay..
But on a lighter note, I hope Chris tells Lesly about Stephanie and that he's the baby daddy, before things get antsy..lolz
And I went to cloud 9 on this scene.. "JC kissed her shoulder blade, burying his face in the nape of her neck. "Mmhm. In a few minutes. Aren't you enjoying the silence? No babies crying. Nobody wandering in here uninvited. Just us, baby," *happy sigh* :)
Nicely done, thanks for the update..
Oh no! I hope her dad makes it! Chris is back in Grayson whoo hooo!
I am with JC and James, it is bliss when the twins are gone. Mine are 4 and keep my busy!!!
I love this series of stories :)
*snickers* This is great, this is so great. lolz Ok, ok..from the top, um finally that Lesly is realizing that Gabe is being kinda "off" with her, aww whats the matter Gabe? You don't like what she said??Well TOO BAD..HA! lolz
Now, off to JC, he's adorable, aww Sutton wants to go with him, I love the bond they share, its so cute. :) These lines here when she asked if JC and James are gonna go on any rides. "JC had to bite his lip from laughing out loud. He certainly planned on going on lots of rides with James. For hours and hours. There was a lot of lost time to make up." Oh yes of course.. ;) ahem, ride it ride it..ok let me stop..lolz like I said, great piece, thanks for the updates.
GRRR! Really Lesly?? Your friend James told you about Gabe, he's such a barnacle brain..LOL I'm glad that James told Lesly about him, but it looks like she doesn't wanna listen to her..oooh I must find out what happens next! :D
*reads next chapter*
I love the drama, JC! So glad Chris is coming back! Thanks for the update :)
Author's Response:
She was a swimmer for the University of Florida and unfortunately I cannot remember her name.
Thanks for reading!
AB
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you're liking it. It's fun thinking up what will happen next for sure ;)
AB
Gabe better not do anything to harm Sutton! Thanks for the update. Chris needs to come back to Georgia :)