*GASP* Gabe is a JERK! Flirting with the other freak at the kinky store, I SO laughed when Chad snapped back at her though, tee hee, but yes James should tell Lesly about what went on..
Now lets backtrack, I like how Leslie texted Chris back(yes you have feelings for him still) these lines here: "Even as good as Gabe was, there was something about Chris" Yes Gabe like a said, is a jerk..lolz.
I don't like how Stephanie treats Chris though, all crabby self..lolz he was so happy that he recieved a text from Lesly though, so that was nice..yes Chris, take a trip to GA.. :)
This was a good chapter, hope all is well and thanks for the update..
Me like this line here: ;) "How creepy are we talking?" he whispered into her ear, causing her to shiver a little. She caught his eye and couldn't help but smile back at him. "Like, creepy grabbing her and whispering dirty stuff? That creepy?" Tee hee.. oh JC, and the joys of fanfic.. :D
Now, something is off about Gabe, why is si interested all of a sudden?? Hmm..sure, I said that he sounded hot, but he has me thinking otherwise..lolz
And I liked the convo b/tween Chris and Joey..
Pretty good chapter..thanks for updating.. :D
Gabe sounds hot... :P and I want some cannoli's now that you mentioned it. LOL
Ahem..now she was thinking about Chris earlier in this chapter, about the times they had together, but she said so herself that she wanted to move on, and Chris kept the baby secret to himself, and that Steph chick claiming that its his baby, and Chris is not even sure..(Now her name is Steph, but that ain't me, she's a goon) LMAO
This was a good chapter, thanks for updating.. :)
QUE??! She's pregnant?? Oooh! This is getting good..Chris told her flat out that he needed to move on and she says the news to him..
And Lesly kept thinking about Chris when she was visiting her brother and company.
Now, I'm glad that JC booked the vacay for him and James, I'm so looking forward for that part. ;)
Nicely done, thanks for the update..
Author's Response:
Glad you are enjoying it!!
AB
Author's Response:
Thanks! So glad you are enjoying it :)
AB
Yes seriously..lolz They need to have their "alone" time.. ;)
Now, getting back to Chris, I like how he was thinking of moving and explaining to JC his situation, and Lesly just Chris to be more open with her, but looks like he's afraid of commitment...maybe he can't be close or too far when it comes to women..hmm.
However, this was a good chapter, nicely done, and thanks for the update..
Author's Response:
Haha! I figured you might enjoy this. Thanks for the review!
AB
Yay! A sequel! :D And its a Chris story! Even better.. *dances*
This was a cute start, though Les is having relationship troubles with Chris, cause he doesn't grow up, that may be true..LOL Everything may seem like a game to him, hmm..
Now, to JC, I like how he wanted to get intimate with James, and she was trying to sleep, its hard to have alone time when they are kids involved..tee hee.
I'm liking this story, looking forward to the next one.. :)