Pumples (Signed) on Apr 19, 2015 12:31 pm (One)

I stumbled upon this while trying to find something new to read and I LOVED it. I got hooked from the first chapter.

I loved how genuinely freaked out Lauren was to discover herself in bed with Justin. Because, let's be honest, if this was real life it would be pretty terrifying to wake up next to him with no recollection. I mean it's J... you'd quickly get over it, but still...

Also, thank you for providing a happy ending. I was a little bit worried in parts that there might not be one.:)




ltaylor03 (Anonymous) on Jun 14, 2013 09:41 pm (Nine)
agh...I had to come back and read this again cause I was feeling fluffy. lol. i really do love this story. and it's totally not just because i'm the main character. i'm convinced i'd read it a million times with someone else as her. guh. I just want more. haha. i need to know where they go from here!

Author's Response: I want to write more for you! Ive barely had the time to focus on writing at alll but I messaged you on Twitter see if you can do what I asked of you :)



cali_meg07 (Signed) on Dec 27, 2012 04:10 pm (Nine)
Soooooo good! Totally a Christmas miracle lol.  I was hoping it all wouldn't turn out to be a dream in some way and you didn't disappoint. Fantastic job!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it!



Camshazam (Anonymous) on Dec 23, 2012 07:49 am (Nine)

Excellent.  I had knots in my stomach wondering how this would all turn out.  In colorado I imagine them opening up abkut gheir respective dreams.  

What an awesome Christmas gift, not only for your secret Santa, but all of your readers.  



Author's Response: Thank you so much! It means a lot to me!



MochaB (Signed) on Dec 22, 2012 12:14 pm (Nine)
Ohmygoooosh I LOVED this. So much.  Can I please have this for Christmas? I'll even deal with the intense confusion and being scared if I could have the end result.  Reading how much Justin loved Lauren made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. Lol he loved her so intensely in dream world, and obviously she did too...or would have. Lol anyway, I have quickly fallen in love ith this couple so if you ever get bored and want to oh I don't know...write some other little shorts dealing with them and continuing this story of their growing real life relationship I wouldn't be mad at you.  Maybe the trip to Vail and them bonding more....or a year or two down the line...you know whatever you'd like. Again I wouldn't be mad. Lol anyway awesome story! i obviously really enoyed it. :o)

Author's Response: I"m so glad you enjoyed this! I think everybody would love for this to happen to them on Christmas, I know I sure would. I don't know if I'll ever be able to expand on this. Maybe for Lauren's birthday if she tells me, I will write another installment. Sounds like a good idea to keep my creative juices flowing! I'll have to have a talk with her.  Thank you so much again for reading!



ltaylor03 (Signed) on Dec 22, 2012 01:28 am (Nine)

D'awwww. I feel all warm and fuzzy. Wouldn't it be great if life was REALLY like this? I mean, I've dreamt about marrying the guy a few hundred times in my life but do you think this could happen to me??? Noooooo he had to go off and marry Jess. LOL. 

EEP. I am oh-so-excited that you had me. Merry Christmas, Happy Holidays to you, my love. I can't say enough how much I love love LOVED this story. Best Christmas story ever. Now I can go to sleep with visions of Justin dancing in my head. Him and his trousersnake. Ahem...too much? LOL

Thank you thank you thank you <3 



Author's Response:

I wish life could really be like that! LOL. I am so incredibly flattered that you liked the story so much, really...I worked very hard on it, and at some points I was like...she's going to think I'm a nut hahaha. Merry Christmas to you my love, and thank you for the inspiration. I got the whole story line going in my head when I read your profile and it said that you were going to marry Justin one day. It just sparked on me and i was like OOOOOOOOOOOOO gotta right that. I started writing the story that very first day, and that NEVER happens to me. Hope your dreams were filled with Justiny goodness, and I figured that would include his trousersnake lmfao.

 

You're welcome, you're welcome, you're welcome!




ltaylor03 (Signed) on Dec 22, 2012 01:20 am (Eight)

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH...

You made them meet in real life! You are forgiven for the beginning of this chapter. LOL :)  




ltaylor03 (Signed) on Dec 22, 2012 01:13 am (Seven)

You know--I totally wouldn't be opposed if you wanted to, say, write up a little short of said sexy time ;) lol

I got all butterfly-y in my stomach when I read this chapter...and now I'm terrified to click next cause I have a bad feeling I'm going to wake up again.  




ltaylor03 (Signed) on Dec 22, 2012 01:06 am (Six)

...ok, this is depressing. Can we get back to the fluff and Justin traipsing around naked again? lol.

 Only partly kidding--girl...I'm in love with this story. And it's not even just because it's all about me. You've done an AMAZING job with the storyline. 




ltaylor03 (Signed) on Dec 22, 2012 01:00 am (Five)

Awww Justin...I like seeing him all vulnerable and stuff. And Trace--it's nice to see him written like this as opposed to how we all usually write him. 

You got one thing right--I'm not sure any of us expected him to turn so...paternal and family-ish.  But that sweet little girl did things to him :) 



Author's Response: I have a sick crush on Trace so I tend to write him more sentimental than most people do at times, although I do have him being a jerk in a couple of my stories. Can't resist him...he's so hot. And yes his baby is freakin adorable.  No, of course I don't stalk him on facebook....LOL



ltaylor03 (Signed) on Dec 22, 2012 12:55 am (Four)

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! *yelling at myself* YOU'RE AN IDIOT! YOU NEED TO GO FUCK HIS BRAINS OUT AND FIX THIS SHIT! RIGHT. NOW. 

 Whew...Ok, I think I'm done. lol. Sorry these reviews are coming out so incredibly delirious. I'm sleepy...lol. But I like reading about Justin and I so I can't stop. :)  




ltaylor03 (Signed) on Dec 22, 2012 12:47 am (Three)
If "I" blow this...I'm going to kill me. It's like that movie The Family Man or whatever, with Nicholas Cage...I feel like you're about to pull that with me. LOL. Please let this be reality.



ltaylor03 (Signed) on Dec 22, 2012 12:39 am (Two)
Good golly--that imagine of Justin strutting from the bathroom to the closet naked is going to sit in my dreams tonight and replay over and over...AGH...I am BLOWN away so far at the direction you've taken this. You should know--I am EXHAUSTED. It's almost 2am but I'm totally going to finish this tonight. And then beg for you to keep writing it. LOL.



ltaylor03 (Signed) on Dec 22, 2012 12:29 am (One)
Oh my god...it's like you've known me my entire life. All I want to know is--who'd you have to stalk to get all this information? LOL. Or am I REALLY that open of a book? 

Author's Response: LOL well the first thing I did was go and read your archive profile, then I clicked on your facebook link and got a general idea of where you went to school and where you live, the rest I just made up from the top of my head. Hope you don't mind that I semi-stalked you haha.



mollyanna5 (Signed) on Dec 21, 2012 11:22 pm (Nine)
AMAZING Story, so enjoyable to read!! I love how you tied the beginning and end together.

Author's Response: Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it!





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