musiccrazedjazzy (Signed) on Aug 01, 2013 06:13 pm (Chapter 16: 2009 - Parent Trapped)
I hate the fact that becca is doing this to their family. JC was an idiot as well. they are both putting Dylan in the middle of their stupid selfishness. they annoy me. cant wait for more.



Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Aug 01, 2013 01:11 pm (Chapter 16: 2009 - Parent Trapped)
Oh God, I feel so sorry for Dylan. Her family is torn apart, and there's nothing she can do about it. Poor Dylan. 



theusagirl (Signed) on Jul 31, 2013 10:42 pm (Chapter 15- 2006: Before He Cheats)

WHAT?! JC?! REALLY?? Well why the heck Tony brought that Playboy girl for, its trouble you know..HMPH. And JC should've known better than to not drink any more drinks..he should've controlled himself but nooooo. *grumbles*

Random fact..Tina was the character in the movie the Mask and she was the tempting one bother Stanley..that is how I'm picturing the Tina you wrote in here about.

This was good! :D Thanks for the update..




Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Jul 30, 2013 08:41 pm (Chapter 15- 2006: Before He Cheats)

Damn! Damn! Damn! Damn! Damn! Josh! Girl, you've got me feeling some type of way about JC between this, and "Tales of a Former Pop Star". Oh boy! The last part of this chapter was so cringe worthy. I was so hoping that JC would be able to keep his cucumber in his pants. I really wanted JC and Becca to work. 

Anyway, great writing, as usual. I can't wait to read the next chapter!  




musiccrazedjazzy (Signed) on Jul 30, 2013 01:03 pm (Chapter 15- 2006: Before He Cheats)
JC is an idiot. Becca is one as well. Move to Chicago or something. Haha I hope Dylan has a plan brewing.

Author's Response: Ha! Loved your solution :) Just wait...Dylan's a little smarty pants in the next few chapters ;)



Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Jul 27, 2013 09:50 pm (Chapter 14 - Every Time You Go Away)
I hope that they can get it together before they fall apart again. They belong together. 



theusagirl (Signed) on Jul 27, 2013 03:52 pm (Chapter 14 - Every Time You Go Away)

Yeah..we would see what happens..hmm..

Now, earlier in this chapter, these lines here: "And then there was the sex, which to Becca was always mind-blowing. He definitely knew how to make love to her and please her and he was methodical about it until he knew she was ready to come. She had never experienced anything better than being with Josh like that. It was almost surreal. Mindblowing it is, oh yes..especially if its with a guy like JC..woww! Ok let me stop, lolz

I love how you write every detail in this chapter, I'm enjoying this story..thanks for the update.. :D




theusagirl (Signed) on Jul 27, 2013 03:45 pm (Chapter 13 - Listen to Your Heart)

OOooh! Dirty text messages between her and JC switching back and forth?? hawt And Joey's reaction is priceless.. HA! I love it, I love that were able to go at it again, and then they went swimming in the pool..

But anyway, I'm glad that they are getting along now, so thats good..

Love the chapter..




theusagirl (Signed) on Jul 26, 2013 11:07 pm (Chapter 12 - Blurred Lines)

These whole set of lines here, can I say AWW?? :D and Goldilocks ran all the way home. She never saw the bears again. The End,” Josh closed the book and handed it to Becca who placed it on Dylan’s nightstand.

“But why didn’t Goldilocks go back and tell them she was sorry?” Dylan asked before Josh or Becca had a chance to kiss her goodnight.

“Because they might’ve eaten her,” Josh said, then saw the look of shock on Becca’s face. “Um, no, I’m kidding. Because her mommy and daddy didn’t want her to go back again. And Goldilocks promised she’d always listen to her mommy and daddy.”

 

Ok, I love that neither of them couldn't sleep and so they went to get it on..YEAH! :D I mean, who could sleep if JC is right in the next room.. :P *sneaks*

And I SO laughed when they were gonna make out on tour bus one time and Chris walked in, I would have loved to see Chris's reaction.. LMAO!

Great job! :D Thanks for the update..




theusagirl (Signed) on Jul 23, 2013 12:08 pm (Chapter 11 - Call Me)

"And all I could think about was how often we had sex in this place, Becca thought. “Oh, well, it definitely brought back some memories.”

Love that Becca and Josh had that "conversation".. together, and in three days it is huh?? I'll be looking forward to those three days.

And I wanna go to JC's house, so I play hide and seek in those rooms, among other things.. ;)

This was good! :D I liked this chapter.



Author's Response:

Haha! Yes, hide & seek w/JC would be a lot of fun ;)

Thanks as always for reading!

AB 




theusagirl (Signed) on Jul 20, 2013 03:45 pm (Chapter 10 - 2005: Thinking About You)

So glad that Becca got cast in "Rent" opposite Joey, thats nice..maybe her career would get back on track.

And when JC was getting in on with Eva, he mentioned Becca's name, so that means he still cares for her, wow.




spoon (Anonymous) on Jul 19, 2013 05:48 pm (Chapter 14 - Every Time You Go Away)
Things were looking so good and now it's all going pear shaped again *sigh* Hope they figure it out.

Author's Response:

They're quite stubborn ;)

AB 




Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Jul 15, 2013 09:18 pm (Chapter 13 - Listen to Your Heart)
I'm so glad that they've decided to give things a second chance. I hope it all works out for the best. 

Author's Response:

Keep reading, Ashley!

Alysen B. 




theusagirl (Signed) on Jul 12, 2013 10:33 pm (Chapter 9 - Dear Goodbye)

Dear Goodbye, I must listen to that song now, its been a while since I actually listened to it, but anyways, looks like she's getting memories of how their relationship used to be.

*reads next chapter*




Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Jul 12, 2013 12:26 pm (Chapter 11 - Call Me)
Ugh! Becca just can't make it easy can she? I know deep down that she wants to be with him!





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