Comments For One Christmas Eve
theusagirl (Signed) on Jan 16, 2013 09:03 pm (Chapter 1)
Author's Response: Thank you :) It was fun to write once the muses hit. I loved how it turned out.
ROFL! The pick up lines!
Aww..what a cute story! I liked it! Though earlier I laughed at these lines when he tried tell his then ex-gf its over:
Tell Chels I said not to bother...with anything that has to do with me. We're over.”
“Wh-What?” her sister said, surprised.
“In the words of an infamous pop song,” JC's lips curved into a smile, “Bye bye bye.”
Haha good one... :P
Now, I like how his friend Ashley stopped by, oh to be hanging out with JC at a toy store would be so fun! :D I could just imagine the adorkableness..LOL I also liked that they helped eachother out and the fact that JC wants to give Ashley a chance with him..that would be nice. :) Above all, cute story, nicely done..
Author's Response: Thank you :) It was fun to write once the muses hit. I loved how it turned out.
ialwayzbesingin (Signed) on Jan 16, 2013 05:01 pm (Chapter 1)
You already know how I feel :) Great job girl!
Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Jan 16, 2013 02:43 pm (Chapter 1)
Awww! Thanks soooo much for this. It was perfect from start to finish, and I truly loved every bit of it! Thanks!
mollyanna5 (Signed) on Jan 16, 2013 12:38 am (Chapter 1)
So very cute! I loved the parts about them re-arranging the pillows on his couch and his last line of the story! I like that it was happy and not too sappy!
