These lines here: made me spit out the popcorn I was eating:
“JC, it’s Chris,” Chris broke in, which told Joey that Chris had snatched the phone from Lance’s hand. “Here’s a bright idea for you. Why don’t you make like a Thanksgiving turkey and stuff it? If you’re just going to talk crap about Sheri, then shut your mouth; otherwise, I’ll shut it for you. ROFL!
And what is up with JC?? I MUST know! So I need to read the next chapter to find out!
And is Sheri's time coming now?? So soon?? :(
Author's Response:
Trying to add a little humor wherever necessary. Hope you didn't make too much of a mess!
I just posted the chapter explaining JC's behavior, so I'll let that do the talking. And if you remember, Sheri told Joey she didn't have long to live anyway: "Maybe three months. Four if I'm lucky." That's why Joey's so bound and determined to help her finish her bucket list. Because it will be over, all too soon.
I can totally hear JC's voice in my mind..lolz As if this weren’t demoralizing enough, JC’s sharp voice kept ringing in his ears: “What would you do if something happened to you? What if you caught something or did something that put you in the ER in two seconds? What then?”
So glad that the guys got Joey to the hospital in the knick of time, and I may agree on Chris though, I really think that Joey is doing a little too much for Sheri, I think he needs to take care of himself now, take a step back you know?? But that's just my opinion...
*reads next chapter*
Author's Response: Joey's heart is in the right place, of course. It's a dangerous risk for him, but on the other hand, he doesn't have much time left to spend with Sheri. These aren't easy decisions, and what's right and what's safe are often two very different things.
Hi! *waves wildly* :D I haven't been able to review your story lately..been busy myself, I have been on vacay since school was let out, but I have been reading some other ones when I had chance..
First of all, I'm SO sorry about your dad! :( a terrible way that your mom found him like that, I'm sure now, he's in a better place... *hugs*
Second, congrats on getting your degree on CW, hopefully, you'll be able to find a job, and it'll turn out well in the end... :)
Now on to this chapter, Joey needs to get to the hospital ASAP!
Author's Response: This has been a year of major ups and downs. I just try to take it day by day, and writing definitely helps.
Author's Response:
That definitely explains a lot. I think if we all knew what a person was truly thinking or feeling, we'd have a lot more sympathy for them and not be so quick to point fingers.
Jake was inspired by Daisy from "The Great Gatsby." Gave every appearance of having it all and being a perfect match, but in truth was shallow and insincere.
Author's Response: I threaten to make myself cry sometimes. Parts of this story got me a bit choked up during proofreading.
Despite what you're going through, I'm glad to hear that this story is helping you and that you find it therapeutic.
But, I feel so bad for Joey. JC I feel is just angry because he's worried, but Joey's sudden realization at how quickly time has passed was a great way to end this chapter.
Update when you can. I'm excited to see where it goes from here.
Author's Response:
It sure is. Writing's helped me through other slumps before, and so has art. It's also good to watch *NSYNC clips and reminisce about the old days. Those clips also help pump out the creative juices for this story.
Author's Response: Joey may have a better chance at recovery than Sheri, but he'll still need to watch his step. He's lucky he made it this time, and as Chris was kind enough to remind him, next time may not go as well.
Author's Response: I'm glad to be working on this story again. It's been on the back burner for ages, and now I feel it will help me.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm not worried about where he is now, but I can't stop wondering why it had to be this soon. I guess we're never really prepared for death, no matter when it comes. That makes this story all the more meaningful, and it may provide some much-needed therapy.
The end of this chapter had me sitting SO CLOSE to the screen trying to see what was going to happen next. Poor Joey. And it hurt my heart to see the others so worried
PS: I want to congratulate you on finishing college, but I'm soooo sorry to hear about your dad. My condolences.
Author's Response: It is nice to finally come back to this story. I intend to finish it, one day or another. And thanks for both sentiments.
“If it doesn’t teach you to not believe in God, it teaches you to fear Him too much and trust Him too little. Knowing that God is aware of me and ready to welcome me home…that also helps me get by. Doesn’t mean I don’t hurt in the meantime, of course. Doesn’t mean I won’t miss my loved ones down here, either. But it’s easier to endure the bad when you have something good waiting for you at the other end.”
Okay so I said I wasn't going to read any more tonight. I lied..not in a bad way lied but I had to read more. And I loved those parts. Thank you for writing them...even as a part of a story I feel like they are important.
Author's Response: Sorry for taking so long to get back to you, but I really appreciate the review. Always means the world to me. :)
There's gonna be a sequel?? :D Ooh!
Ok, from the top, I'm SO glad that Joey and Chris are friends again..I actually felt when Chris poured his heart out to Joey on how he really felt about Joey having cancer..the moment when they both hugged and cried together got to me.. *tear
And also like the moment where Justin and Joey were reconsidering their friendship in the kitchen as well.. :)
But I remember THIS phrase from Titanic: the priest was saying it when everyone was sliding down, “And God shall wipe away all tears from their eyes; and there shall be no more death, neither sorrow, nor crying, neither shall there be any more pain: for the former things are passed away.” of course he said it much differently, he said "former world" or something...
Great chapter though, I enjoyed it.. :) Thanks for the updates..
Author's Response:
Yeppers! Don't know how long or elaborate it will be, but I see potential for at least one more story in this area. I've already got the title and cover page, but I'm going to wait until this story's completely done.
Told you the guys' behavior would make more sense later on, and in good time, you will know JC's reasons, too. Goes to show that people care so much more than they admit, and it's so easy to develop a tragic misunderstanding.
I was never crazy about Titanic. It's not a bad movie, but it's just not for me. I will listen to the soundtrack, but I don't care to watch the film.
"God Must've Spent a Little More Time On you.." :)
I'm glad that Sheri shed some light on Joey on reading the "Book of Revelation, and those words and phrases do have a deep meaning though...
Good chapter... *reads next one*
Author's Response: Beautiful song. I used to be wary of the Book of Revelation, too; I stole a few peeks at it from time to time, but never really understood it. Those verses are easily my most favorites; they portray God as He truly is, and we have that assurance that everything will be okay in the end, if not in the ways we expect.
Author's Response: If it were any sweeter, your head would explode into cotton candy.
Author's Response: Thank you!
