Comments For Fading Sun
theusagirl (Signed) on Aug 08, 2013 01:38 pm (Chapter 12: The Struggle)

Wow..thats a pretty good quote! Very true though, you hold up all those emotions inside, and one day, you just have to let it out. And I think who the unexpected visitor is, hmm..I'm gonna have to read the next chapter to find out.. :)

Oh..and P.S I never knew you had DevianArt, I have one too! Though I only made two drawings of the Powerpuff Girls and other things..lolz I don't go there much, but if you wanna have a look at them, the acct is under the same username..I did find you, but didn't know how to add you..



Author's Response: I seldom cry myself, but sometimes even I reach a point where I just can't help it. Yes, I have a DA page, and I go there fairly often.



theusagirl (Signed) on Aug 07, 2013 09:44 pm (Chapter 11: Mutual Threads)

Yeah *NSYNC and their songs have that much impact on people, I remember when things felt really down for me, it was some family issues and stuff, and some of their songs have kept me going. Its a great feeling, no other band/artist can make me feel what they make me feel, did that make sense?? LOL

Anyways...I also like like ABBA too, "The Winner Takes it All" is one of my faves.. :)



Author's Response: Makes perfect sense to me. Even after all these years, some of their songs continue to move me, such as "Music of My Heart." I don't think I could ever get sick of that song. And ABBA is awesome as well; "The Winner Takes It All" gets me every time, too. You have good taste.



theusagirl (Signed) on Aug 07, 2013 09:27 pm (Chapter 10: Sheri)

Sheri! The name fits :D Well thats nice, maybe Sheri can explain to Joey about the details of what happened to her..poor girl had lost her leg though, that is so awful.

And I do like the cover page, its pretty neat. Nice job on this chapter.. *reads the next one*



Author's Response: Thank you very much! And happy reading!



theusagirl (Signed) on Aug 07, 2013 09:22 pm (Chapter 9: Unexpected Company)
Who who?? *reads next chapter*

Author's Response: Now you know, obviously.



theusagirl (Signed) on Aug 05, 2013 10:45 pm (Chapter 8: Facing the Unknown)

Wowsers is right..

These lines here: You’ll get through this the same way everybody else does, sir—one day at a time.” Hopefully I think Joey would overcome this, he has his four best friends to be there with him through thick and thin, and this is not gonna be an easy task, it'll be difficult, though I have never(nor anyone that I know) experienced something like this, and I don't wish this for anyone.. :( But I love the fact that you are writing this and you can show readers about the experieces you had with your mom regarding this.

Good chapter though..



Author's Response: That's how I got through it, one day at a time, and friends, family, and God kept me going. While I still wish my mom never had cancer, I can't very well say I'd give up those priceless life lessons.



theusagirl (Signed) on Aug 02, 2013 11:33 pm (Chapter 7: The Final Word)

I'm glad your mom's cancer was treatable, that is so good to know.. *hugs*

Now, on to the chapter, poor Joey, and the reaction of the guys have no words.. :(

I would like to read the next chapter so i can find out whats gonna happen next..



Author's Response: Yeah, that was the good news, but it was awful to hear that it was cancer to begin with, and she didn't get better in a hurry. For a while, I wasn't sure I was going to make it myself. I kept wishing it was some nightmare that I could wake up from and everything would be okay. So you can tell that I know what I'm talking about in this story. In spite of the grim topic, it actually feels good to write something like this; sort of therapeutic, you could call it. And I'm being merciful and giving Joey a chance for recovery, too. Feel free to read this any time and leave as many reviews as you like.



DiamondDoss (Signed) on Aug 02, 2013 07:48 pm (Chapter 11: Mutual Threads)
I can't wait to see where this story goes. And loved the ABBA reference and song.

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I love ABBA, too, and "Super Trouper" ranks among my all-time favorites. It's one of those classic make-you-feel-better-about-yourself songs. 



Alysen Blaine (Signed) on Aug 02, 2013 03:33 pm (Chapter 11: Mutual Threads)

Loving this story! Also, your banner is super sweet! I wish I had the talent for those!

Keep up this awesome work!

Alysen B. 



Author's Response: Thank you, for both your review and your compliment. Putting something like my cover page together is actually quite simple, if you have a good understanding of layers and special effects in Photoshop.



theusagirl (Signed) on Jul 28, 2013 11:18 pm (Chapter 6: The Big Test)

Yes, laughter is the best medicine.. :)

And these lines here: JC said, “If they’d tried that on me, I would be out the door before they came anywhere near me with that thing. In fact, forget the door; I’d just go straight through the window!” LMAO! I can just imagine..

Though the tests sound scary, but I'm gonna read the next chapter, to find out what happens next..



Author's Response: That's just the sort of thing JC would do, I imagine, especially considering how he once reacted to an ear thermometer! 



DiamondDoss (Signed) on Jul 28, 2013 03:45 pm (Chapter 9: Unexpected Company)
Okay so can you like update NOW?? It's like crack. I'm addicted. Give me a hit please. A Joey hit. ;)

Author's Response: I'll update when I'm good and ready.



DiamondDoss (Signed) on Jul 27, 2013 06:42 pm (Chapter 8: Facing the Unknown)
Okay so I want to go into a corner and bawl my eyes out over a story. I lost a Papaw to cancer and know many people going through or have gone through it. I love all of the feelings and emotions and everything else you write in and can't wait for more. :)

Author's Response: Sorry if I'm making you cry, but that also pleases me because it means my story's convincing. Since I plan to be a REAL author someday, this is a valuable skill.



creativechaos (Signed) on Jul 24, 2013 03:10 am (Chapter 6: The Big Test)
I know it's coming, and boy does it hit close to home with me. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Sure hits close to home with me, too, as you can imagine. Thanks for reading!



theusagirl (Signed) on Jul 21, 2013 11:27 pm (Chapter 5: The Patient)

*tear :( Yeah that dramatic music they play in the background, you have to grab some Kleenex tissues and prepare for the waterworks.

Now, I'm glad that Lance decided to stay with Joey for the night, and they are gonna take turns taking care of him, so thats nice. I know Joey would pull through this.. :)

Good job, thanks for the update..



Author's Response: That's just the kind of thing they'd do, I'm sure.



DiamondDoss (Signed) on Jul 21, 2013 09:28 am (Chapter 4: Bad News)
An hour later, Joey could be found simmering in the waiting room of the nearest hospital in the district. He sat as far on the edge of his chair as he could without falling off, his arms folded atop his knees, grumbling a steady stream of indistinct words to himself. On his left side, JC was quietly flipping through the latest issue of People and looking smug. Lance sat in the chair on Joey’s right side, toying with his phone, and Chris and Justin stood close by with Styrofoam cups of coffee.

I loved this short description, I could see it in my mind like the guys were sitting right here in my living rooom. Well if that wouldn't be something awesome. Anyway, I am so glad you are writing a Joey story. And yes, I agree about needing more Joey, Chris and Lance stories. I hope you will keep going on this, even thought it gives me a slight twinge in my stomach to think of what is coming next...even though it is just a story. Great job!!

Author's Response: Thank you. I believe in providing enough detail to give my readers a good idea of what's happening while leaving some room for imagination.



theusagirl (Signed) on Jul 20, 2013 02:18 pm (Chapter 4: Bad News)

Oh no! How awful.. :(

Honestly I actually thought that Joey was iron deficient or something..

I hate it when doctors break the "news", its always so frightening, you don't know what to expect.



Author's Response: Don't I know it. You don't want to be left in suspense, but not knowing also serves as a sort of shield.





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