theusagirl (Signed) on Dec 14, 2013 10:48 pm (Chapter 18)

WOW OH WOW!

I just LOVE what Addie did to JC, she took control of him, THATS the way it supposed to be, switch the tables a bit, or roles..but before any of that seducing happened, it kinda creeped me out that JC heard what was going with Addie and Lance, but then like I said, she took control, an unexpected twist.. and he liked it.. :P

But Lance also heard the convo of what happened, hmm..

Anyways though, JC wants to marry Addie, and she said yes..I'm kind of happy for this, but a bit on the worrysome side..because I'm not so sure, but maybe JC changed???

Good update.. :D




Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Dec 14, 2013 05:51 pm (Chapter 18)
Oh hell. 



Megan (Anonymous) on Dec 07, 2013 01:27 pm (Chapter 17)
Oh for goodness sakes, what a monster JC is! He has no right to treat her like that, especially with Ryden around! Oh Addie, please be smart and finally get out and away from him!

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theusagirl (Signed) on Dec 05, 2013 09:30 pm (Chapter 17)

*GASP*

My goodness gracious! Its SO obvious that JC has an uncontrollable temper tamtrum, and its wrong. He needs to learn to trust her, and Addie should do the same, cause this is ridiculous, its a vicious cycle, first he loves her then he hits her, no no no, and all this is happening in front their son.

Now, he's not hitting her all the time, but the verbal abuse hurts, and its sad. I hope things get resolved soon, or JC is going to go back to that place so can rejuvenate himself. :(

Good chapter though! Thanks for the update.



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Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Dec 01, 2013 06:18 pm (Chapter 17)
Ugh, this just made me so mad. I wish I could just jump into this story and fight for Addie. If she doesn't kick his ass, I will. Yeah, I know that might not sound politically correct, but whatver, it took me there. 

Author's Response: More to come soon :)



theusagirl (Signed) on Nov 15, 2013 11:16 pm (Chapter 16)

I gave in and smiled at him, as I always did. He was easy to give into, even when he was an ass. Of course she gave in, because its freakin JC, he has that thing..that sort of aura to him..BUT..he just gets annoyed whenever Ryden cries.

Now I'm glad that everyone showed up and Chris was playing with the baby..these lines here: "

“You’re a cute little pooter!” Chris cooed at him and JC frowned.

“That’s the dumbest name I’ve ever heard,” he told Chris and Chris rolled his eyes

LOL!

The interview went slightly okay, because it was so important to JC, and the fact that earlier in this chapter he was seducing Addie after he was kinda bickering with her..yeah typical..

Hmm..would like to know how the rest of this story goes, update when you can.. :)



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Megan (Anonymous) on Nov 13, 2013 11:44 pm (Chapter 16)
Gah! It's so frustrating that Addie won't just take a chance and let the truth come out! I understand that she is in an abusive relationship and that is a tough situation to deal with but jeeze! She clearly isn't happy and is terrified that JC is going to do something. Good update! :)

Author's Response: Thanks, Megan!!!



Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Nov 11, 2013 07:46 pm (Chapter 16)
Poor Addie. She needs to realize that the verbal abuse is still abuse. I can't wait until this girl wises up. Hoping that your boyfriend won't pummel you is not as good as it is. She deserves so much more. 



Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Nov 05, 2013 08:14 pm (Chapter 15)
It's clear that JC hasn't changed, and the situation's worse now that there's a child involved. If Addie stays, then the older Ryden gets, the more damaging it'll be to him. I hope now that she has her son, she can see more clearly, and finally make that break through and leave JC behind. Despite what she thinks, she doesn't need him, and neither does Ryden. 

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. And as bad as JC is for her, she's going to have to learn the hard way.



Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Nov 05, 2013 07:44 pm (Chapter 14)
I don't know why I didn't expect this. Unfortunately in situations like this, the person being abused will more than likely return to their abuser before finally reaching a breaking point. I just hope that Addie reaches that breaing point soon. 



theusagirl (Signed) on Nov 05, 2013 07:19 pm (Chapter 15)

*dun dun dun

Well I'm scared a little bit..and JC dear, if you are angry than maybe you could've gone outside to take some air??

But looks like he apologized to her for yelling at her, I hope he doesn't become a beast again.

Good job though! Thanks for the update.. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review as always ;)

Yeah, he apologized, but I think Addie will have to learn the hard way.... 




theusagirl (Signed) on Nov 04, 2013 08:53 pm (Chapter 14)

*GASP*

Ok ok um these lines here: "

“He,” I told him. “He deserves it.”

“We’re having a boy?!” JC’s eyes widened and he chuckled softly.

“Yeah,” I nodded and smiled at him. “We’re having a boy.”

A BOY?! AHH! Little JC! *squee* I kinda had a moment.. :D

But I DO hope he has changed, because I like how concerned and gentle he was with her now, and they romped multiple times of course, and Jenn and Brooke caught them in action, well..literally.

Addie wanted him, and it looks like JC wanted her..lets hope it stays that way, and nothing horrible happens.

Nice job..and thanks for the update.




theusagirl (Signed) on Oct 15, 2013 08:00 pm (Chapter 13)

So glad that Addie is out of Mississippi, and looks like she and Lance are taking a break off of eachother, I mean, I would be smothered if I had to be in Mississippi and be away from my friends and all my usual stuff, but it looks like since Addie is back in Orlando, she is also getting kind of stressed.

And JC really looks that bad?? :( Damn, I'm beginning to get a soft on him again, was that supposed to be a bad thing?? And it looks like Addie is slowly wanting to forgive him, and what is that skank he's dating?? What is he rebounding??

Hmm..maybe Addie needs time to think things through.

Good chapter, looking forward for more..



Author's Response: Thanks for reading!!



Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Oct 15, 2013 07:53 pm (Chapter 13)
Back to Orlando. Why do i feel like this means more tourble for Addie? Can't wait to read more. 

Author's Response: More to come soon :) 



theusagirl (Signed) on Oct 04, 2013 09:23 pm (Chapter 12)

Because Lance is different to what JC was, I mean JC was nice at first but then he kinda changed, hmm..looks like Addie wants JC back, does she?? Is she developing old feelings for him??

And for the surprise, I really thought that Lance got Addie a puppy! AWW! CUTENESS! But no he didn't..instead he got her Jenn and Brooke.

I think Addie should go back to Orlando and live with Jenn with Brooke cause it looks Lance is keeping her there under his thumb until she gives birth, I mean I know he cares but still.

Good chapter though..  :)



Author's Response: Still working through how I feel about Lance right now. Thanks for your review!!





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