Author's Response: Addie's slowly learning, that's for sure. Glad you liked it and thanks for your review :)
OH MY GOODNESS GRACIOUS! How scary that he just showed up! But he didn't harm her..he just wanted to touch her belly.. *sigh* BUT..super Lance came to the rescue, poor Addie, I think this little break to Mississippi would do her good..for a little while, I honestly would be crushed if I had to leave my homestate and leave my family and friends, but if the guy is psycho, then its for a good reason to leave..until things cool off.
Great job! Thanks for updating! :D
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Thanks! Stay tuned ;)
alysen b.
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Thanks for reading, Ashley!
Alysen B.
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I remind myself every time I write him straight here that it's fiction. Trust me, I debated for a while, but for me, it just fits in this story ;)
Thanks for reading!
Alysen B.
Ok I have no idea why the heck I am beginning to feel a soft spot for JC, even though he practically made Addie miserable, curse you JC for being so, so, what's the word?? I don't know, can't think of anything for him, hmm..maybe sappy is a good word..lolz
Now, I like the playful banter scene between Lance and Addie in the bathroom, these lines here: “At least let me get this for you,” he put the washcloth between my legs and began to massage me. I couldn’t stop him. It felt too good, so I let him continue and soon he was the one on his knees. :P
I also like that Addie is choreographing "Three4One" now, and Kaitlyn is clueless since she's new..lolz
Above all, great chapter, looking forward for more, thanks for the update..
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Hey congrats on your award!!!
Alysen
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Thanks for the feedback, Ashley!
Alysen
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Thanks!!
Alysen B.
*GASP* Oh wow..WOW! JC admitted everything, and everyone knows, good he's in prison, (can't believe I'm saying this) But I am SO GLAD HE'S THERE!
This chapter frightened me, :( the way you write in descriptive detail is incredible though.
She had such a wonderful evening with Lance and JC ruined it..Ruined it completely.
So is she gonna continue to have the baby?? And maybe Lance would adopt it?? That would be nice..
Good job though on this chapter..thanks for the update..
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As always, your feedback is so appreciated!
Thanks for reading!
Alysen B.
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We'll see.......... ;)
Alysen B.
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Thanks, girl! I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Alysen B.
Wow oh wow...I'm SO happy that Addie and her friends were there to back her up...and kudos for Chris for being there as well..and I love the fact that Addie is getting the chops to talk back to JC...YEAH :D
Good job on this chapter, looking forward to read more.. Thanks for the updates..
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Thanks for reading!!
Alysen B.
I'm scared.. :( But thanks for the warning..
Addie you have to tell someone, I mean Lance knows, but I think you have to tell someone now about all of this..
It was really nice that Addie and Lance shared their moment, go with Lance, he's safe..
I gotta remember this is fiction, not real, but I know that probably alot of relationships go through this, such a sad and scary thing..
*reads next chapter*
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Thanks for reading!!
Alysen B.
Ok, I've been reading this story from the beginning and can't hold back any longer! What the fuck is wrong with JC? Holy crap dude! Addie I can understand because being in that type of relationship is brain washing and you feel as though your trapped and no one will understand. What a chapter, very very well written!!
On a side note completely unrelated......anyone else aware that *Nsync will be reuniting at the VMAs on Sunday?? OMG OMG OMG!!! :)
Author's Response:
Megan, I actually squealed like a teenager when I heard the news!!!
Thanks for the feedback :) It was hard to write for sure, esp because I adore JC!
Keep reading!
Alysen B.
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Extremely tough to write, but thanks, girl.
Alysen B.