theusagirl (Signed) on Aug 14, 2013 10:06 pm (Chapter 6)

WTF JC! I wanna strangle him now, you controlling possessive FREAK! UGHH!

OMG This is SO good! A bit scary, but good..

I think Addie should quit, she should, and the other guys should help her out, ignore what JC said, but he makes it sound so threatening and it must be so hard for her. Damn.

So abusive.. *sigh*

Awesome job on this! Thanks for updating..



Author's Response:

It's super hard to write JC like this but I'm glad people are enjoying it. Thanks again for your response :)

Alysen B. 




theusagirl (Signed) on Aug 14, 2013 09:31 pm (Chapter 5)

Lance to the rescue! That part where Addie went to cry on him made me get all teary..

But OMG! JC is a beast! She's pregnant, I knew she was gonna be because they've been screwing eachother the whole time, at first Addie was enjoying it, but now I think she's starting to see a whole new perspective.

It feels like I'm watching "Sleeping With the Enemy." and I remember while watching the movie, I wanted to punch the sleazy guy on screen..hmph. I wanna do that to JC right now.. *balls fist* I can give a pretty good punch..

These lines here: “I didn’t want that,” I said through gritted teeth. “I don’t always want you like you think I do. You don’t care about me. All you want me for is sex. And God only knows what the hell you were doing or who you were doing two nights ago when I was in the hospital.” I stood up and faced him. “We’ve been dating or whatever you call this for almost two months. You haven’t taken me to dinner or to a movie or anything. You don’t let us hang out with anyone because all you want to do is fuck me. Well, guess what? I’m tired of it. I didn’t want it tonight and I don’t want it again. We’re done.”

Woot! She told him off, that must've felt so good..but the jerk didn't listen.

Great job on this chapter, off to read the next one!




theusagirl (Signed) on Aug 14, 2013 12:19 pm (Chapter 4)

Well, Addie..you should know when you too much is too much, you weren't listening to your conscience Jiminy Cricket huh?? lolz But looks like she was having wayyyy too much fun, and not just her, but the others too, but I at least they were responsible of it.

And JC is being too, whats the word?? Controlling is one of them, and lusty very lusty..all he wants is to get into her pants and lets get on with it everytime he sees her?? No no no..




theusagirl (Signed) on Aug 14, 2013 11:48 am (Chapter 3)

"I’d seen him interact with fans on television – Johnny made us all watch fan interaction videos to get the hang of what could potentially happen – and he was so sweet to them. He was a pro and the JC I had watched weeks ago on those videos was not the JC I was with then.

Yeah..he has that seductive side to him, that freaky deaky side.. *grins*

*reads next chapter*




theusagirl (Signed) on Aug 12, 2013 10:59 pm (Chapter 2)

WOW! This is SO good! :D

This reminds me of a CSI epi I watched, there was this party and everyone was drinking and making out right in front of everyone..without a care in the world.

But really, JC? Don't be so jealous or whatever you have, relax..

But the drink that Chris invented made me giggle: “It’s called a Chris Special. Rum, Vodka, and Schnapps,” he replied. “Shoot it.” LOL

*reads next chapter*



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! And I've had a "Chris Special" and it was made during a drunken night much like the one I wrote about....minus Nsync being there of course! ha ;)

Alysen B. 




theusagirl (Signed) on Aug 12, 2013 10:33 pm (Chapter 1)

Well hello, I am liking this, but wow JC, can you like, get to know her first?? lolz

These lines here: "I could hear my preacher yelling from the pulpit about fornication. Fornication was wrong. Fornication would send you to hell. Don’t fornicate.  LOL Go away preacher man..HA!

Hey when you are in the moment with a guy like JC, who would actually think??

I'm liking this so! *gonna read the next chapter*



Author's Response:

Just wait...you might not be so fond of JC in a few chapters... ;)

Alysen B. 



Author's Response:

Just wait...you might not be so fond of JC in a few chapters... ;)

Alysen B. 



Author's Response:

Just wait...you might not be so fond of JC in a few chapters... ;)

Alysen B. 




Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Aug 11, 2013 07:22 pm (Chapter 6)
*Goes to get boxing gloves* Ugh, I cannot stand JC. (Never thought I'd say this). He can't make that choice for her. Lance is right, run Addie! Run as fast as you can! 



Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Aug 11, 2013 07:22 pm (Chapter 6)
*Goes to get boxing gloves* Ugh, I cannot stand JC. (Never thought I'd say this). He can't make that choice for her. Lance is right, run Addie! Run as fast as you can! 

Author's Response:

Haha! I know, right? Such an ass!!

 Thanks for reading!

Alysen B. 




Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Aug 06, 2013 06:13 pm (Chapter 5)
Oh boy this is a huge mess. I hope Addie decides to keep the baby though, she can use this as an opportunity to start her life over without JC. She can get through this with the right people supporting her. Showbusiness doesn't seem like the life for her anyway. 



mollyanna5 (Signed) on Aug 04, 2013 10:32 pm (Chapter 5)
oooh I like that Lance is coming into play now.... intriguing!!



mollyanna5 (Signed) on Aug 02, 2013 10:31 pm (Chapter 4)
urgh JC is an ass!  I hope he gets a wake up call soon! It's interesting to read JC written this way, keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

Thanks! I know, it's tough to write him like this, but all in the name of fiction ;)

Alysen B. 




Anonymous (Anonymous) on Jul 30, 2013 08:49 pm (Chapter 4)
I have been in this type of relationship. Trust me you become stupid because you think everything's ok when in reality it's not. I hope he gets a kick in the nuts.

Author's Response:

Don't worry....it's coming ;)

Thanks for reading!

Alysen B. 




Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Jul 30, 2013 07:51 pm (Chapter 4)
Okay. I really did not like JC's response. God, I hope Addie does not get pregnant, I hope a pregnancy scare will scare her straight. And you're right, I definitely do want to slap her right now, and do a whole lot more to JC. That bastard. 

Author's Response:

It's sooo difficult writing him this way, but it's also stretched my creativity as well. Don't worry, there will be more with James and JC coming up in the Grayson Series and you won't want to kick his butt ;)

Thanks for reading!

Alysen B. 




Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Jul 29, 2013 01:49 pm (Chapter 3)

Oh boy. This is like watching a train wreck; You know it's about to happen, yet you can't look away. Addie, she's so naive, and JC's too controlling. This is the formula for an abusive relationship, whether it be verbal or physical. I think that JC's in lust and not in love. He likes the fact that Addie's innocent and naive, because he can take advantage of that. And I just want to scream every time they have sex, I mean I know Addie's been pretty much sheltered, but it's like damn girl, you're 19, haven't you ever heard of "No glove, no love"? Ugh!

Anyway, great writing, can't wait to read your next chapter!



Author's Response:

Right?! The sad thing is, I based Addie off of a girl I went to undergrad with. Her parents had homeschooled her in a remote little town and she went crazy wild in college and thought it wasn't a big deal...It drove me crazy!!!

 Glad you're enjoying it ;)

Alysen B. 




spoon (Signed) on Jul 29, 2013 09:18 am (Chapter 1)
I like this so far. JC being a bastard is definatley an interesting read. Lookingforard to reading more.

Author's Response:

Thanks, girl! Stay tuned for more :)

Alysen B. 






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