WTF JC! I wanna strangle him now, you controlling possessive FREAK! UGHH!
OMG This is SO good! A bit scary, but good..
I think Addie should quit, she should, and the other guys should help her out, ignore what JC said, but he makes it sound so threatening and it must be so hard for her. Damn.
So abusive.. *sigh*
Awesome job on this! Thanks for updating..
Author's Response:
It's super hard to write JC like this but I'm glad people are enjoying it. Thanks again for your response :)
Alysen B.
Lance to the rescue! That part where Addie went to cry on him made me get all teary..
But OMG! JC is a beast! She's pregnant, I knew she was gonna be because they've been screwing eachother the whole time, at first Addie was enjoying it, but now I think she's starting to see a whole new perspective.
It feels like I'm watching "Sleeping With the Enemy." and I remember while watching the movie, I wanted to punch the sleazy guy on screen..hmph. I wanna do that to JC right now.. *balls fist* I can give a pretty good punch..
These lines here: “I didn’t want that,” I said through gritted teeth. “I don’t always want you like you think I do. You don’t care about me. All you want me for is sex. And God only knows what the hell you were doing or who you were doing two nights ago when I was in the hospital.” I stood up and faced him. “We’ve been dating or whatever you call this for almost two months. You haven’t taken me to dinner or to a movie or anything. You don’t let us hang out with anyone because all you want to do is fuck me. Well, guess what? I’m tired of it. I didn’t want it tonight and I don’t want it again. We’re done.”
Woot! She told him off, that must've felt so good..but the jerk didn't listen.
Great job on this chapter, off to read the next one!
Well, Addie..you should know when you too much is too much, you weren't listening to your conscience Jiminy Cricket huh?? lolz But looks like she was having wayyyy too much fun, and not just her, but the others too, but I at least they were responsible of it.
And JC is being too, whats the word?? Controlling is one of them, and lusty very lusty..all he wants is to get into her pants and lets get on with it everytime he sees her?? No no no..
"I’d seen him interact with fans on television – Johnny made us all watch fan interaction videos to get the hang of what could potentially happen – and he was so sweet to them. He was a pro and the JC I had watched weeks ago on those videos was not the JC I was with then.
Yeah..he has that seductive side to him, that freaky deaky side.. *grins*
*reads next chapter*
WOW! This is SO good! :D
This reminds me of a CSI epi I watched, there was this party and everyone was drinking and making out right in front of everyone..without a care in the world.
But really, JC? Don't be so jealous or whatever you have, relax..
But the drink that Chris invented made me giggle: “It’s called a Chris Special. Rum, Vodka, and Schnapps,” he replied. “Shoot it.” LOL
*reads next chapter*
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! And I've had a "Chris Special" and it was made during a drunken night much like the one I wrote about....minus Nsync being there of course! ha ;)
Alysen B.
Well hello, I am liking this, but wow JC, can you like, get to know her first?? lolz
These lines here: "I could hear my preacher yelling from the pulpit about fornication. Fornication was wrong. Fornication would send you to hell. Don’t fornicate. LOL Go away preacher man..HA!
Hey when you are in the moment with a guy like JC, who would actually think??
I'm liking this so! *gonna read the next chapter*
Author's Response:
Just wait...you might not be so fond of JC in a few chapters... ;)
Alysen B.
Author's Response:
Just wait...you might not be so fond of JC in a few chapters... ;)
Alysen B.
Author's Response:
Just wait...you might not be so fond of JC in a few chapters... ;)
Alysen B.
Author's Response:
Haha! I know, right? Such an ass!!
Thanks for reading!
Alysen B.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I know, it's tough to write him like this, but all in the name of fiction ;)
Alysen B.
Author's Response:
Don't worry....it's coming ;)
Thanks for reading!
Alysen B.
Author's Response:
It's sooo difficult writing him this way, but it's also stretched my creativity as well. Don't worry, there will be more with James and JC coming up in the Grayson Series and you won't want to kick his butt ;)
Thanks for reading!
Alysen B.
Oh boy. This is like watching a train wreck; You know it's about to happen, yet you can't look away. Addie, she's so naive, and JC's too controlling. This is the formula for an abusive relationship, whether it be verbal or physical. I think that JC's in lust and not in love. He likes the fact that Addie's innocent and naive, because he can take advantage of that. And I just want to scream every time they have sex, I mean I know Addie's been pretty much sheltered, but it's like damn girl, you're 19, haven't you ever heard of "No glove, no love"? Ugh!
Anyway, great writing, can't wait to read your next chapter!
Author's Response:
Right?! The sad thing is, I based Addie off of a girl I went to undergrad with. Her parents had homeschooled her in a remote little town and she went crazy wild in college and thought it wasn't a big deal...It drove me crazy!!!
Glad you're enjoying it ;)
Alysen B.
Author's Response:
Thanks, girl! Stay tuned for more :)
Alysen B.