OMG I miss this storiy so much! Think you'll ever come back and update it? *Does cute-sy pouty begging face*
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Glad you are enjoying it!
Alysen B.
UGH! This is really good! Its so creepy that Clay is like stalking Sutton and JC's every move..AHH!
But anyways, earlier in this chapter, these whole set of lines here make me smile, because JC in real life doesn't act like the high-profile celebrity he is, and I am so glad.. :) "“That’s the girl whose dad I saw sing live one time!” Sutton had heard all about her father being in a band with Chris and Joey and Justin Timberlake and Lance Bass. But that had been a long, long time ago and Sutton, though she had seen a few videos, hadn’t really cared all that much about it. To her, her father was just that-her father. He was funny and he could sing and they had a great time together no matter what they did. She’d never known him as a famous celebrity and sometimes she couldn’t believe he ever was because he’d always just been “Dad” or “Daddy.”
And I also like how Chris reacted when he was waiting for this girl that auditioned for Disney, he's such a smart aleck.. LOL Its true though, Disney hasn't been the same.. :(
Above all, good chapter..looking forward for more, thanks for the update.. :)
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*gasp* Stalker much?? I know that Sutton is her actual father, but still.. :( AHH! The suspense!
*sigh* Now, on to a lighter note, OMG! Chris with kids! *squee* He is SO adorable, I would love for him to have kids.. :) Little Chris! AHH! I would cry of happiness, because he is just so darn cute.
This is good! Thanks for updating..
Author's Response:
Thanks! I agree, he'd be a fun dad for sure :)
Alysen B.
Clay makes me nervous : /
Chris would make a wonderful dad, in this story or in real life. : )
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading, Sarah!
Alysen B.
Author's Response:
That's a great description and one I'd never thought about til now. Thanks for the feedback!!
Alysen B.
*dun dun dun
He went on searching spree looking for Sutton, ooh! What is Clay trying to do?? Every photo that he was seeing made him get angry than the last one.
Good chapter..thanks for the update..
Author's Response:
Thanks as always :)
Alysen B.
Author's Response:
Thanks! And thanks again for your help ;)
Alysen B.
Author's Response:
Hoping to get out more this weekend ;) Thanks for your review!
Alysen B.
Oooh...well, thats something. Hmm..that line really made Clay mad, he needs to control his temper, I hope he doesn't go to Grayson and cause a scene..is he??
On a lighter note, I like the playful banter between Chris and JC in the studio, these lines here: "
“Hello?” Chris called into the large studio as he opened the door.
“Chris?” he heard JC’s voice from behind one of the small voice studio rooms.
“Yep,” Chris answered, and followed the sound of JC’s voice. He was sitting at a piano, plunking out a few random chords and humming to himself as he did so. “Hey, man. Lesly kicked me out. Apparently trying on jewelry was not her idea of a good time for me.”
“Unbelievable,” JC chuckled and stopped playing. “Are you really lacking for something to do?”
“I’m bored as hell,” Chris admitted, sitting down across from JC on a leather bound couch.
LOL! I can totally hear Chris saying that.
Pretty good chapter..thanks for the update..
Author's Response:
Thanks! More to follow soon...
Alysen B.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much :) Chris should be making more of an appearance as the story goes on. More surprises to come!
Thanks again for your review! It means a lot.
Alysen B.
Author's Response:
You'll find out :)
Thanks for reading!
Alysen B.
Author's Response:
Hehe. Oh, it's coming ;)
Alysen B.