Comments For Intuition
Krissy (Anonymous) on Jan 25, 2014 04:38 pm (Chapter 15)
That cliffhanger is not nice. Not so patiently waiting for the next chapters. :)


MissM (Signed) on Jan 25, 2014 11:12 am (Chapter 15)
Pretty sure I'm going to due waiting fur the next update!! 


Keediluv (Signed) on Jan 25, 2014 08:15 am (Chapter 14)

You are a genius!!!!

A page turning, plot twisting, beautiful dialog writing genius!!! You've taken us in every emotional direction possible and I'm hanging onto every word!!!!

I love you my friend!

Ki 



Author's Response: KI! I'm so excited you discovered this one! I love you too! I'll have more up soon!


MissM (Signed) on Jan 23, 2014 05:59 pm (Chapter 13)
Oh hell! I knew it sounded too easy! Get him!!


MissM (Signed) on Jan 23, 2014 07:08 am (Chapter 12)
OOOOOOOH get him! 


Nikki (Anonymous) on Jan 23, 2014 06:59 am (Prologue)
Yes, yes...hopefully, they be able to get to the girls in time. Kinda reminds of that Castro guy that kidnapped those 3 girls in Cleveland and held them hostage for all those years. However, all the girls were found safe and sound last year....hopefully, this story will have a positive ending, as well.

Author's Response: I hope so too! thanks for reading!


MissM (Signed) on Jan 22, 2014 01:43 pm (Chapter 11)
OH man. Gracie got some good intel! 


Krissy (Anonymous) on Jan 21, 2014 03:29 am (Chapter 11)
I created an account just to post reviews, especially for this story because I freakin love it so much. Keep those chapters coming. 

Author's Response: Hey thank you so much for reading and replying! I really appreciate you taking the time to do that! Welcome to the archive and I hoPe you enjoy the next parts of the story!


MissM (Signed) on Jan 20, 2014 05:16 pm (Chapter 10)
Man I love this story! The vulnerability here is great. Peel back the layers.... 

Author's Response: Thanks miss!! I'll have another chapter up soon!


lizzy99 (Signed) on Jan 19, 2014 03:33 pm (Chapter 9)
I feel bad for Justin, i hope Grace can help him.

Great chapter, I'm loving all the updates keep them coming ;)

Author's Response: thanks for reading! more soon!


MissM (Signed) on Jan 18, 2014 10:02 am (Chapter 7)

UGH this story! So many emotional levels to Justin, loving his inner struggle, how his impefections are coming out in his drinking and the state of his apartment... how he thinks no one can see his pain. Gracie is the perfect person to break him because he can't hide from her. 

I also love how we see more insight into his relationship with Monica... we now know what happened between them and it isn't that she's a bitch keeping him from his kid. She's a mom keeping her kid from her alcoholic father.

BUH! So good. *sits and patiently waits for more.* 



Author's Response: IM so glad you are enjoying this! Thanks for giving me a confidence booster here! I'll continue shortly!


lizzy99 (Signed) on Jan 17, 2014 01:07 pm (Chapter 6)
I just read all the chapters and I loved all of them! I'm hooked! :) keep updating :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope to have an update soon!


MissM (Signed) on Jan 16, 2014 09:39 pm (Chapter 6)
Oh holy shiznit! But if course he's too smart to give out his real name!? 

Author's Response: Hmmm I guess we'll have to see!


creativechaos (Anonymous) on Jan 16, 2014 12:13 am (Chapter 6)
Get to the locker woman!! lol


creativechaos (Signed) on Jan 15, 2014 08:18 pm (Chapter 5)

This is so awesome. You're so good at this. Justin's apartment is...blech. At least he has clean clothes. I hope Gracey encourages him to make a turn-around. 



Author's Response: yes I figured he couldn't be smelly he's to hot...just his apartment could be.  I hope she does too...we'll have to see :)




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