Tiffany (Anonymous) on Mar 20, 2016 12:41 am (
Barbados (JT Bday Vac) Part 3)
Hope yo can update soon. Love your stories.
Tiffany (Anonymous) on Oct 27, 2015 02:03 pm (
Barbados (JT Bday Vac) Part 3)
Just re-read the whole story up til this point. i love it. i hope you can update again soon.
alee_92 (Signed) on May 19, 2015 08:57 am (
Barbados (JT Bday Vac) Part 3)
OMG just wow!!! Can't wait for the next update if this and Grown. Keep up the good work!
MochaB (Signed) on May 16, 2015 08:37 pm (
Barbados (JT Bday Vac) Part 3)
What a freaking mess. I'm mad at Justin. I'm mad at Melanie. Why even out yourselves in that position where you know neither one of you have much self control and get drunk off each other so easily? And that could've been anybody that saw them the night before. I'm guessing it wasn't Jessica or Rachel though. Both of ther reactions wouldn't have been so simple. I'm guessing that things are going to get very, very bad before they get good, particularly for Melanie. She's STILL trying to recover from a bad relationship and now she's brought this big pile of crap into her life. She may be in a sexual haze now, but her bubble is gonna be popped and ish is going to hit the fan. I don't doubt it. Update soon!!
Nikki (Anonymous) on May 10, 2015 10:16 am (
Barbados (JT Bday Vac) Part 3)
I hope he doesn't hurt her; sleeping with (2) women within hours of each other...smh. Interesting to see how things go after Barbados.
Tiffany (Anonymous) on Apr 22, 2015 10:06 am (
Barbados (JT Bday Vac) Part 2)
Wow. HOT!!I need another chapter. who was that that saw them. I have so many questions. lol I know real life come first but i hope to see an update soon. (crossing my fingers)
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Mar 24, 2015 07:56 am (
Barbados (JT Bday Vac) Part 2)
Beautiful and awesomely sexy update. Loved it...update soon, please.
jjaxzz59 (Anonymous) on Mar 18, 2015 04:20 pm (
Barbados (JT Bday Vac) Part 2)
I'm so glad you wrote another chapter! How could those two be so careless? Jessica is already suspicious. I wonder who was watching? Is the sh*t about to hit the fan? I love the chemistry and heat between Justin and Melanie.
jjazz59 (Anonymous) on Dec 24, 2014 02:18 pm (
Barbados (JT Bday Vac) Part 1)
I'm so excited to see this new chapter!!! Rachel needs to calm her butt down. She is being childish. I love that Melanie and Trace bonded. Lynn is so nice and friendly. She greeted Melanie with a hug and noticed how pretty she is. She picked up immediately that Justin was attracted to Melanie. A mother knows. I hope Melanie has the time of her life there.
Author's Response: Mothers always know. It's maddening! Thanks for reviewing
MochaB (Signed) on Dec 23, 2014 09:26 pm (
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Girl I beg of you...BEG of you to let Melanie tell Rachel off so bad Rachel never dares to even think a bad thought towards Melanie for fear that she will feel her wrath again. PLEEEEASE. I seriously can't stand her. From the very beginning. She showed up to the studio cause she's a nosy bia trying to force Justin to be with Jessica and force him to not have feelings for Mel. Ad her attitude had every bit to do with her visit. She could probably tell something was up or she was just plain mad as usual that Justin was there with Mel alone while Jess is in his hotel room. Either way that's why she was mad but she has no right to take it out on everybody, including Mel, just cause her own feelings about the situation. She seems to have forgotten that she's not in an intimate relationship with Justin and Jess. This isn't some threesome. Your feelings about Justin and Jess are invalid no matter how close you've grown to Jess while they have dated off and on. She needs to get knocked into reality. All the while sleeping with Trace and keeping it a secret. Child please! Please let Mel give Rachel a piece of her mind and no apologies afterward cause Rachel deserves it. She deserves to hear it from Justin too, but mainly Mel since she seems to think Justin's feelings are Mel's fault. Now Mel also needs to give Justin a peice of her mind as well be a use this fool still sleeping with Jess and basically in a relationship with her without the title, yet he kissing on Mel. Got Jess in his family and friends beach house with his family, yet telling Mel she knows it wasn't a mistake. Son please! You need a good dose of reality yourself. Mel needs to let him know. Mel has been through enough. Although she has warm and fuzzy feelings for Justin she can't allow him to kiss on her and be more than friendly towards her when he was a girlfriend. She'll just end up more hurt. He's not in love with Jess, ok fine. Stop treating her like she's your girlfriend and end things with her. Stop sleeping with her and kissing her. Don't play either of them, but especially Mel. Jess should know Justin by now and realize that he isn't as in love with her as she is with him but love is blind. Lol I like that Mel and Trace talked and I hope they form a great friendship. She needs someone else on her side that's in Justin's inner circle since Rachel trying to make Mel seem like she's bad for Justin. I mean who doesn't have baggage?! Ugh I absolutely can't stand her!! Lol ok I think I'm done for now. I love that Lynn is there and she met Mel and she knows her son very well. She's not blind or deaf. Lol hopefully her and Mel have a chance to get to know each other more and Lynn will also be in her corner. Ok, update soon! Merry Christmas! :o)
Author's Response: Well somebody is pissed! Haha :) Merry Christmas
Tiffany (Anonymous) on Dec 23, 2014 12:32 am (
Barbados (JT Bday Vac) Part 1)
i squealed when i saw this update. i enjoyed the update and can't wait for part 2. Something tells me Barbados is going to be exciting. hope you can update soon. Love both this story and Grown.
Author's Response: I squealed when I finished! HAHA
alee_92 (Signed) on Dec 22, 2014 09:40 am (
Barbados (JT Bday Vac) Part 1)
Thanks for the update and I can't wait for the next!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing
Nikki (Anonymous) on Dec 22, 2014 08:47 am (
Barbados (JT Bday Vac) Part 1)
A great chapter, looking forward to part 2.
Author's Response: Thank you!
alee_92 (Anonymous) on Nov 02, 2014 10:29 am (
Mr. Generous )
OMG!!! About damn time they kissed! Lol I agree with Jessica is trying to mark her territory, but he's feeling Mel a little bit more. The way he wrapped his arms around her bc she was cold was soooooo cute. It's the little things. Damn you Rachel, butt out! Can't wait for the next update!
Tiffany (Anonymous) on Oct 17, 2014 09:05 pm (
Mr. Generous )
I literaaly squealed when i saw an upadate. Oh boy Jessica is here . I knew she would eventually show up. I wander if Rachel been telling her about how close Mel and Jsutin have become. She was really all up in Mel business and hanging all on Justin like she marking territory. This is going to be interesting. Mel noticed that although Jessica is all into Justin but he dosen't seem to feel the same. As for Rachel once again she messes up the flow. i wander if she saw or found out about Mel going to the studio with Justin.
well look forward to more soon.