DAMN IT, JC!
love his characterization in this--even though i kind of want to slap him upside the head. (also, i may or may not be creeping all of your stories right now. so, um. yeah.)
Author's Response: Haha. This was my way of dealing with him when his girlfriend dumped him. Ugh this sad sack. I don't mind the creepin' at ALL! ;)
Gaahhh!
It mde me smile and laugh and sigh and then sad. I want to give jace a hug.
i love too!
Author's Response: Sorry for the delay in responding! I didn't realize I still had reviews for this story. Thanks so much for reading!
Author's Response: HAHAHA! Thanks babe! Now doesn't everyone feel sorry for that sad sack???
Where did she go?! She just packed up and left?? Without saying anything?? Wow..this was actually pretty good, love how how descriptive you wrote it, if you know what I mean.. ;)
Now, earlier in this chapter, you mentioned Toyota Tercel, I have that car..best car EVER! :D Ok that was random..
Above all, this was a good read, I liked it.. :)
Author's Response: There will be a part two! ;)
You!!!! The banter, her whole attitude in the beginning of their 'arrangement', JC and everything he is, the sex!! Whew, you put me through the paces with this one. If I could be that kind of girl for a period in my life.... I'll leave that open to whatever it could've been lol. I know JC is frustrating you but really mama, you can't tell. You already know...
Ki
Author's Response: LOL! Yeah I had to deal with my ~ feelings~ about JC. HAHAHAH.
Sooo...I read this while I was at work...THAT was awkward. LOL. This so needed a not safe to read while at work warning!
Loved the idea and absolutely loved JCs character. I totally wouldn't mind if you wanted to give Jessica a short back story...and maybe let us on to why she just up and left.
As always, thoroughly enjoyed reading!
Author's Response:
Well I left it pretty open for a part two so as soon as I figure out what her deal is, you'll get her side of the story. For now I needed a way to deal with what a sad sack the man is right now, with his emotional unavailability. He's driving me nuts... why does he not have a wife and six kids that look exactly like him by now? Geez, get with with it dude.
And I rated this story NC17 yo! that was your warning! I also tweeted that it was NSFW, but prob not on the NF twitter. OOPS. :D Glad you enjoyed it!
Author's Response: WOOT! thank you! I'm sure there will be a part two soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! I love wriing from a male POV so I can be simple and crass. LMFAO!
Author's Response: Thank you!!!