theusagirl (Signed) on Oct 27, 2013 08:02 pm (Chapter 4)

WOW OR WOW! This was a fun read, I was gonna review every chapter but I don't think I needed to, love the way you mentioned each of the guys POV.. :D

Pretty good job on this.



Author's Response:

Thank you love! I had a good time with the first one so I had to do something that reached that level of intensity. Hope that was conveyed! 

 

Ki 



Nik (Signed) on Oct 27, 2013 09:35 am (Back At It)
The face! :-O STEAMY!!! Great writing!

Author's Response:

Lol thanks honey!!

Ki 





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