Comments For Sweet Child of Mine
Lyndsi (Anonymous) on Jan 29, 2014 05:45 am (Chapter 17)
Such a good chapter. Why do I get the feeling that the press may become a problem?? I'm loving how affectionate they want to be. We will see how that progresses. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks, Lyndsi! I'm so glad you are enjoying it. More should be out later today :)



Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Jan 26, 2014 11:13 pm (Chapter 16)
Aww, they're going to give it a try! I hope everything works out for them and for Emma-Claire. I love reading this story! 

Author's Response: Glad you like it, Ashley :) More coming soon.......



theusagirl (Signed) on Jan 26, 2014 10:22 pm (Chapter 16)

*squee* They are gonna give it try! *dances*

Ooh! I like this line here: “Because I’ll rock your world later and show you what a real man does when he makes love.” That was HOT, OMG! I can hear him saying that. :P

But anyways, so no touchy feely around Emma Claire, good..got it. Hmm..might be difficult for Annie and JC though, I know I would have a bit of trouble, cause JC is attractive..lolz but its for the best, so we would see how it goes. :)

And I like how Jimmy acts towards JC about him dating Annie..tee hee.

Great job! :D Thanks for the update..



Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it!!!! And yeah, I could definitely hear JC say that hehe More coming soon :)



Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Jan 26, 2014 04:11 pm (Chapter 15)
My, oh my! I don't think I've ever been more jealous of fictional character in my life! And yes, this is the one that I've been waiting for. 

Author's Response: Haha!!! I laughed out loud when I read that!! There will be plenty more steam coming up in the next few chapters ;)



champ (Signed) on Jan 26, 2014 03:57 pm (Chapter 16)
good update

Author's Response: Thanks!!



Sarah (Signed) on Jan 26, 2014 04:43 am (Chapter 15)
Holy cow! I need a cig after that. Love it. I also enjoyed JC plying Barbies, very funny.

Author's Response: HA!! Glad you liked it...check back for more tomorrow ;)



Lyndsi (Anonymous) on Jan 26, 2014 12:03 am (Chapter 16)
That was such a good chapter. They both don't want to hurt Emma but I have a feeling there will be some highs and lows coming. I can't wait for another chapter. You always leave me wanting the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks, Lyndsi! Another one should be up tomorrow :)



theusagirl (Signed) on Jan 25, 2014 11:07 pm (Chapter 15)

I am laughing so hard right now! The image of JC playing barbies is hilarious! LOL I can so see him doing that! :D

These lines here: JC nodded. “Sure. It’ll be fun. Daddy used to play Barbie’s with your Aunt Heather.” This was partially true. By playing Barbie’s with his younger sister it had usually meant that he would kidnap a Barbie doll on behalf of He-Man and GI Joe and Heather would usually find Barbie propped up in Greyskull Castle.

“But if we don’t go shopping today what will I wear to the movies with Ken?” he said, his voice sounding like a small child. *giggles*

Now on the fun part! FINALLY they KISSED and had some foreplay, see?? Annie?, don't be ashamed, this is JC we are talking about..I LOVE that it happened so naturally, no pressure! WOOT! All that grabbing and kissing and touching..AMAZING! Especially if its with JC freakin Chasez, yeah I went there..lolz

Ok let me stop, AWESOME job on these chapters, I managed to review all of them, so yay! :D



Author's Response: Thanks, Steph :) I'm glad you liked the way I portrayed their foreplay. I was trying to make it as natural as possible. Thanks for the review!



theusagirl (Signed) on Jan 25, 2014 10:46 pm (Chapter 14)

HOLY *thud* THIS: JC looked at her and wished he wasn’t her boss. If he wasn’t her boss, he’d tell her in very explicit terms exactly what he’d do to her and where and when and if she wanted to, he’d take her upstairs to show her just how much he could make her scream his name. He shook himself out of that thought and smiled at her. “It’s not,” he told her softly. “Trust me. It’s really easy and it’s a lot of fun to please someone who makes you crazy.”

Oh don't I know it! JC you naughty freak you! This is why we all love you.. :D I'm so giddy right now..lolz

Ok, ok..um Doug is a GOON, and I seriously wanna hit him with a Yoshi egg..LOL He only wants Annie to please him, UGH! Break up with him, he's too..blah.

I love though that earlier in this chapter, she was acting free and goofy, I act like that most of the time, meaning JC and I would be perfect for eachother, hey one can dream.. ;)

But anyways, I like how Annie and JC made conversation, they are both trusting eachother, which is a good thing..

*reads more* :D




theusagirl (Signed) on Jan 25, 2014 10:18 pm (Chapter 13)

“She’s cute,” Jimmy gestured towards Annie.

JC, assuming Jimmy meant Emma-Claire, responded with, “Thanks.”

Jimmy looked at him as if he were crazy. “I meant your nanny.”

“Oh,” JC rubbed the back of his neck with his hand and looked over at Annie and Emma-Claire. “Yeah. I guess.”

“Wow, you’re full of it,” Jimmy shook his head at JC. “You can’t tell me you haven’t thought she was pretty.”

JC shrugged. He didn’t want to give anything away, so he tried changing the subject. “Yeah, anyway, so we have the girls on Lance’s show and then –“

“You’re blushing,” Jimmy pointed and slapped JC’s shoulder. “Wow, you have thought about her in another way, haven’t you?”

I love how Jimmy just keeps on going with this, and JC keeps ignoring it..LOL

Ok, this was nice.. :) I liked the part where all three of them were at the park, the chemistry between them is working, and Emma Claire is seeing it.

These lines here towards the end: That fall today had just been a fluke, clumsy thing and JC was cute, she’d give him that. And when a strong, cute, older man looked at her with those beautiful, sharp eyes, what else was she supposed to do? Ignore that? She’d be blind to have ignored that. No. It was a fluke. It was done

*happy sigh* that typical JC stare, I mean COME ON.. forget Doug Annie and go with JC..

Woot! This is GOOD! *reads more*




theusagirl (Signed) on Jan 25, 2014 09:57 pm (Chapter 12)

Someone is J-E-alous! JC's got bitten by the jealous love bug! AHH! I knew it! And its so hard for him to express his feelings towards her..because she's TAKEN, by Doug.. :P

Now, the dreams that JC had about the endless women in his life is rather interesting, and he dreamt about Annie, so who knows?? ;)

I also love that he's being nice to Emma-Claire now..yay! Thats a start.. :)

*reads next chapter*




kb4jc (Signed) on Jan 24, 2014 05:55 pm (Chapter 15)
Omg. Please I want Moore 



Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Jan 24, 2014 04:37 pm (Chapter 14)
Hmm, JC would be sure to make her toes curl... Among other things. 



Lyndsi (Anonymous) on Jan 24, 2014 02:04 pm (Chapter 15)
Hot, Hot, Hot. I loved this chapter. Now what's gonna happen when they wake up??? I can't wait for the next chapter. I just don't want JC to start taking advantage of Annie because of how much she cares for Emma. 

Author's Response: Working on the next chapter as I type this! 



theusagirl (Signed) on Jan 23, 2014 09:56 pm (Chapter 11)

Jerk or not, he had a nice physique and there was no denying that

Nope, no denying.. ;) and everything else..ahem..anyway!

THIS: “I hope you have fun in New York. And I hope that while you're gone, you miss your little girl so much that you will wish for her to come wake you up in the middle of the night again,” Annie spat. “This isn’t what I signed up for. I’m a nanny, I’m not supposed to be a parent!” She was on a roll and didn’t stop. “I love your little girl which is the only reason I’m not going to quit and I know you know that I’m the only stable thing she’s got right now and you’d be a fool to fire me. But this is the last straw. You’ve got to learn how to do some of this shit yourself or else I don’t know how long I can take it. I realize you have to be awake soon. I realize you’re a big music producer and you’ve got your own life to attend to. But you’ve got to realize that there’s a little girl in there who’d do anything for you to pay her some attention. You’ve got to realize that life doesn’t always turn out the way you planned it to turn out. Things change, roll with the punches!”

I was like YEAH YOU GO ANNIE! Tell him off! Woot! Woot! *fist pump* :D I was so glad that she told him off, that felt good.

And then when Doug came over and watched "The Breakfast Club" but things were started to go South b/tween the both of them but Annie put a stop to it.

And the fact that JC may be falling for her..HA! I knew it! These lines here:

And he needed to get over the fact that he was falling for Annie Leighton.

Above all, GREAT chapter, I liked this one a whole lot.. :D



Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed! Hope you like the rest!!





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