Hee, hee. I was wondering when we were going to see that bedroom scene. It still makes me laugh just picturing it. Great chapter. Kayleigh is so cute.

Okay can I just say I love you writing. No matter the story or characters. I'm always "involved" in your stories. It's always sad when the chapter ends. BTW, nice inclusion of "Baby It's Cold Outside". :)

Two chapters in two days, Thanks so much. I'm loving the story. I love how you write the guys interacting. Can't wait to see if JC shows up. Why do I have a feeling that Lance is going to have to fight for his daughter?? I just the feeling that someone from the moms past is going to show up. Cant wait for another chapter!!

Yay, you've updated!

I love how Rayne said she wouldn't date Lance but doesn't have a problem going shopping with him. Some could see that as an intimate thing that couples do together like buying groceries. (If that makes sense).

I absolutely LOVED the part where Kayleigh tried to sing Dirty Pop, but couldn't get all the words. Not only was it cute to think about, but the fact that she couldn't sing all the words apart from "It doesnt matter" at times was really funny.

Woo Hoo an update. I loved how you introduced Rayne. I'm really liking her character and why does it feel like she has a story of her own?? I love the interaction between Chris and Lance. I always love seeing how people write the relationship the guys have amongst each other. Thanks so much. Can't wait for the next update.

Everytime I read this story I fall more in love with Rayne! Can't wait to see what else happens with these two :)

Such a good chapter. I love how Lance is just jumping right in and taking charge. I am so excited to read more. Can not wait to see if or when the other guys may meet Kayleigh. I hope you update soon. Thanks for writing.

Loved seeing where teh quoted part from the chat came in, here. Also oved seeing mre of "Work Lance" as well. :D

“Chris, how am I ever going to do this?” he asked. “I have to make sure this kid makes it to eighteen without killing somebody or dying of starvation or something.”

“Feed her and don't give her a gun then,” Chris said, smiling.

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I burst out laughing at that part. The ending was really cute, too. I would've liked to have seen Lance at his work again to really show the different sides to him: his work side and his fatherly side.

Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Next chapter ;)

The line "Just call me Daddy" had me tearing up. I love how your write Lance and Kayleigh. Can not wait to read the next chapter. Hint Hint Hint. Love it.

Love it. I'm already hooked. 

Awwww, the ending was so cute! I knew she was going to ask to share his bed.

I love when new stories are posted and I am in love with this one already. Love that Lance jumped right in and is taking control. Kayleigh seems like a sweetie. This is gonna be good I can feel it. I hope you update soon I'm ready for another chapter already. Keep it up.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! It is going to be good, I can feel it too! I'll try to update as soon as possible.

Kayleigh is so cute. I thought the pacing for this was really good and I loved how Joey automatically thought that Chris was killed. I love how you write kids.

Author's Response: You know I was partially inspired by you and how you write kids! The other boys will probably play their own special roles in this one, because you know them...