Comments For You Ruined Me
theusagirl (Signed) on Feb 05, 2014 10:30 pm (Chapter 1)

Mel..are you trying to make me cry?! *tear The beginning was extremely sad, she died..

And the flashbacks JC was having about her, though he was left to raise Hailey all on his own, until he found Amelia..

The moment that Hailey was reported missing and she was found, and when JC couldn't handle his own emotions.. aww..

The ending was nice though, that was good news.. :)

Pretty good piece though..



Author's Response: Thanks. Its an old one. Before i realized that i needed to specify things. Yeah its not the greatest but its fun to see an old sory. Haha





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