Lyndsi (Anonymous) on Sep 16, 2014 06:51 pm (
Chapter 20 - Vegas Wedding (Part Two))
So excited for the update!! I love that Eric is involved now and I hope he puts two and two together quick to save Mel. I dont like when you leave with a cliffhanger. I hope you update soon I want to see if Addy is ok!!
AceofSpades (Anonymous) on Sep 15, 2014 11:45 pm (
Chapter 20 - Vegas Wedding (Part Two))
I really liked the part with Eric and Melissa's mom. His "not on my watch" line put a smile on my face. Yay, Eric, go find her. Great chapter.
AceofSpades (Anonymous) on Aug 18, 2014 09:38 pm (
Chapter 18 - Looking For The Prince)
Another great chapter. I wasn't expecting how it ended though, that was a good plot twwist to it.
AceofSpades (Anonymous) on Aug 07, 2014 09:10 pm (
Chapter 17 - This Love I Have Is Pulling Me To Death)
The ending was great. Nice hook in the last sentence.
AceofSpades (Anonymous) on Jul 27, 2014 08:25 pm (
Chapter 16 - Hold On To The Nights)
Aww, I feel so bad for Chris. I loved the inclusion of Harry Potter and 3 Doors Down in this. I hope they can make up soon
AceofSpades (Anonymous) on Jul 26, 2014 09:34 pm (
Chapter 15 - My Heart Will Go On)
How could Mel do that? Or Chris for that matter? Great chapter. I loved the line about Stephanie and Addy being shocked about Celine's orchestra.
I'm so glad you've updated. No pressure for whenever you can get a new chapter out.
AceofSpades (Anonymous) on Apr 03, 2014 08:52 pm (
Chapter 10 - Maybe It Is A Bad Thing... (Part Two))
I liked the emphasis of Mel knowing that while Chris was putting on a face for TV, she could clearly see that there was something wrong with him. I think it shows good characterization and shows how much she cared about him.
WannaSpaceRideJC (Signed) on Mar 28, 2014 10:25 pm (
Chapter 7 - Surprise Visits and Secrets)
such a good chapter! i dont even know what else to say besides keep em coming!
NSYNCLVR (Signed) on Mar 28, 2014 08:58 pm (
Prologue - Gotcha)
Yay!!! Another update!! I'm loving this entire series! I totally did not expect that story from Stephanie. That was really sad. I wonder what's happening with Addy and Lance. Love all the original characters and portrayals of the guys. Can't wait for an update!!
WannaSpaceRideJC (Signed) on Mar 16, 2014 10:24 pm (
Chapter 6 - Glamorous)
No no no! Don't slow down!!
WannaSpaceRideJC (Signed) on Mar 15, 2014 11:35 pm (
Chapter 5 - Changes)
God I thought I wanted to hug Chris before! Now he's breaking my damn heart!
I'm a little mad at Mel for not trying to at least call someone, but I understand the paralizing fear she must be in.
Joey needs to get slapped, he should not be gawking so openly at the nrw choreographer, he's a married man!
Speaking of, is Justin married in this, or are we ignoring Jessica? (like he should do IRL... oops I didn't say that)
Author's Response: Hahaha! Justin is not married in this. Unless my plan changes part of the way through (it's happened before), Jessica won't even be in this. And no one has to worry about Joey...he can look, but I have my doubts that Justin will let him touch. (Oooooh, foreshadowing?)
And everyone will start figuring out the little mysteries soon. (Why Addy and Lance are having problems, what's happened with Mel, what's in store for her future, etc.)
Lyndsi (Anonymous) on Mar 14, 2014 07:51 pm (
Chapter 4 - By The Grace Of God)
I loved when Addy punched Wade!!! I never liked him, still dont. Loved that you wrote him as such an asshole. He always rubbed me the wrong way. I want Melissa to be found ASAP!!! I dont wont her to get seriously hurt. I want Lance and Addy to be okay. Can you promise me they will be okay??? Pretty please!! Can't wait for the next chapter, like seriously can't wait, Hurry up with it. Just kidding take your time and enjoy the process. I will patiently wait!!!
AceofSpades (Anonymous) on Mar 14, 2014 07:41 pm (
Chapter 4 - By The Grace Of God)
I think Justin has the best/funniest lines in this story so far.
Great job.
AceofSpades (Anonymous) on Mar 13, 2014 08:30 pm (
Chapter 3 - Promises)
heh, heh. Blue's Clues. And i also laughed at the "piss in your coffee and call it milk" thing. Gone is one of my favorite songs. Nice inclusion.
WannaSpaceRideJC (Signed) on Mar 09, 2014 09:01 pm (
Chapter 2 - Gone)
Loving it so far. Glad to see that Lance and Addy are getting somewhat of a break by not having horrible things happen directly to them. I just wanna give Chris a hug though!
Author's Response: They still have a big part in this story, so I can't guarantee anything! ;)
