Happy Holidays!
I didn't realize you had updated. Great chapter. The ending was great and really making me want to see what would happen next.
This was my favorite part:
“Ugh, ‘I’m fine’ from you is like ‘I’m fine’ from a girl. It means you’re actually not fine, and it’s really freaking confusing.”
“Compare me to a girl one more time, and you’re gonna be less than half the man that you used to be.”
Justin groaned. “Song references are off limits. Especially the album fillers.”
Great job.
Wow. I mean, really, wow. I don't even like *NSYNC. I don't even know how I found this website. But if there's one thing I do know it's that this is some pretty good shit. Post the next chapter, NSYNCLVR, I really wanna know what happens next.
“Are you drunk?” he heard Joey’s voice reply. “What are you drinking? Whatever it is, stop it right now.”.......“Well, then there’s something in your coffee. ‘Cause I can’t even start to fathom why you would say you love that douchebag.”
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Favorite line from Joey! Plus, it was a great opening. yay for Lance for leaving Tyler. I think you captured the whole, "he hurts me, but I love him so I can't leave him" mentality perfectly here. I also love how you showed Joey and Lance's friendship, too.
Anyway, great start here.