Megan (Anonymous) on Jun 09, 2014 09:55 pm (Wet Dog and Pool Parties)
Haha asshole for scaring her by jumping in the pool! And hum yeah...JC in a pool...hot! :)

Author's Response: I liked that part too...I feel as if from a lot of videos and interviews that although he's a serious guy regarding his work, he likes to goof around and laugh. I thought the cannon ball was fitting :)


Lyndsi (Anonymous) on Jun 09, 2014 07:01 pm (Wet Dog and Pool Parties)
That last bit in the pool was hot!!! I am loving this story. Keep up the great work. 

Author's Response: Nothing wrong with the visual of JC shirtless with water dripping eh?

Author's Response: Nothing wrong with the visual of JC shirtless with water dripping eh?


Lyndsi (Anonymous) on Jun 08, 2014 11:11 pm (Phone calls and Fruit)
I am loving it!! Keep up the great work. I like that they are both hesitant not to jump in to fast. Cant wait to read the next chapter.


kb4jc (Signed) on Jun 08, 2014 08:48 pm (Phone calls and Fruit)
Love the story 

Author's Response: Hope you love the rest! Thanks for the review!


Megan (Anonymous) on Jun 08, 2014 07:30 pm (Phone calls and Fruit)

Wow, that girl has some willpower to resist that sexy ass man in bed! :) 



Author's Response: Indeed. Much more than I would have had...

Author's Response: Indeed. Much more than I would have had...


Megan (Anonymous) on Jun 08, 2014 06:38 pm (Late Nights and Guard Dogs)

Thats such a bummer that her apartment got broken into, but glad that JC was there for her.

Side note....I didnt know they canceled the Jesus Christ tour! :( 



Author's Response:

Oh my gosh, yeah. I'm sorry you heard about it here. JC hasn't spoken about it much just a vague tweet and then a picture of the crew and himself flipping off.

Thanks for your review, yeah it was a bummer...but you're lucky I just posted the following chapter and she's not hurting too much ;).



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Jun 07, 2014 03:40 pm (Late Nights and Guard Dogs)
Keep it coming! 

Author's Response: Will do!


champ (Signed) on Jun 06, 2014 11:11 pm (Tacos and Text Messages)

Hope you update soon.

 



Author's Response: You're in luck as you will get another chapter today ;)


heartless (Signed) on Jun 05, 2014 02:43 pm (Inspiration and Boy Bands)
I was so excited when I saw that you had posted two additional chapters! :) I still really like the plot so far. Keep on keeping on! 

Author's Response: :) Thanks for taking the time to review AND add me to your favrorites!


champ (Signed) on Jun 04, 2014 11:51 pm (Inspiration and Boy Bands)
awesome. keep the capters coming!!

Author's Response: Will do! Thanks for reviewing!


Megan (Anonymous) on Jun 04, 2014 09:35 pm (Inspiration and Boy Bands)
Oh my gosh, that moment when JC answered the door shirtless to tell that Kenny guy off was great! Knight and shinning armor kinda guy :). Really liking this story so far and cannot wait to read more!

Author's Response: I love that moment too, it had been in my head for some time and it was just what I needed! More JC deliciousness to come! ;)


JCfan93 (Signed) on Jun 04, 2014 08:22 pm (Inspiration and Boy Bands)
I don't review much, but when I do, it's for an awesome story like this! Seriously, love reading this. The chemistry between them is great! Keep writing, please!

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review this one! Stay tuned, something new coming soon! 


Anonymous (Anonymous) on Jun 04, 2014 06:26 pm (Inspiration and Boy Bands)

I'm really enjoying this. Just one note of constructive criticism: watch your tenses. It kinda jumped from present to past tense throughout.

Looking forward to more!



Author's Response: Thanks for the constructive comment! I am going to go back and check it out now to make some changes. I just needed to get that out of me today and didn't pay enough attention apparently. Thanks again and I hope you enjoy the rest that is coming! :)


heartless (Signed) on Jun 03, 2014 08:46 pm (Dead Batteries and Sugary Drinks)

This first chapter was enticing and only the start to what will be a great story, I'm sure! Definitely left me wanting to read more. I like the dynamic between Ari and JC and am excited to read more in the near future! Great job!



Author's Response: Thanks! Stay tuned real soon for the second chapter!


Lyndsi (Anonymous) on Jun 03, 2014 07:48 pm (Dead Batteries and Sugary Drinks)
I like it so far. I am looking forward to seeing how their freindship grows. Keep it up!!

Author's Response: First review! Thanks! Should have a second chapter real soon! Hope you'll enjoy!




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