Author's Response: Thanks for commenting on that, I find that it is easier for me to go forward with the story when I can put both of the POV's in.
They KISSED! He kissed her! *squee* I want this man, I need this man..I sound like a crazy teenaged girl..LOL
I'm so happy for these two.. :) I think they are gonna be so much more then friends after this, am I right?? ;)
Author's Response: Keep reading ;)
GUH! JC is so sweet in this story! OMG! I love it.. :D
But poor Ari.. :( Who was the looch that broke in?? Hmm..I have a strange feeling that Kenny may have something to do with this, after JC shot him down, maybe Kenny has friends..
And interesting name for a dog, Maestro..I can hear that dog making a CD..LOL
Author's Response: Good insticts there...so much that I hadn't even thought of that...hahahah. Maybe that can be of use later...hmmm..
This was a sweet chapter.. :) I love how their friendship is blossoming, I know that probably in reality, he acts like this, its what makes us fans love him even more..
I'm enjoying this story a whole lot..
Author's Response: I agree that the fans have probably figured a big part of his personality and that it's mostly normal...lol
JC on top?? Yes please.. ;) lolz and then I'll lay him down and -ok let me stop..LOL
I SO laughed when Ari told him that she was a Brian Littrell fan..tee hee, then she texted him later that it was JC all along..oh to exchange digits with that man..and everything else..one can dream.. :P
And I also giggled at these lines here: So I lied. You have always definitely been my favorite.
Grinning like a fool, he closes the message and slides the phone back into his pocket as his friend Jimmy walks into the room.
“What’s the goofy grin for?” his friend asks, taking the chair beside him and placing his stuff on the table.
“Inspiration.”
Nicely done..I'll read more.. Oh! I was supposed to update my story today, but I do have another story thats completed already, feel free to read/review them whenever you get the chance...thankies. :)
Author's Response:
I like their back and forth a whole lot as well, I think that's what makes them good for each other.
I'll check out your story!
WOOT! *fist pump*
Tell him JC! :D
Ok, let me backtrack, I can totally see his expression when he's saying this:
I just…we’ll take the…other way up.” She answers, grabbing his elbow gently and pulling him toward an adjacent alleyway.
“The other way up?” he questions, his voice sounding extremely uncomfortable as she pulls him into the alleyway “You’re not actually a rabid fan that has some fantasy of tying me up in an alley and doing unspeakable things to me before stuffing my body into a dumpster are you? Cause if you are, I swear my Mom will start looking for me within a few weeks.”
LOL
And if JC comes to my house looking like THAT.. :P I would... ;)hmm..no I have to respect him, yep..
Anyways, Kenny is a jerk, and I LOVE that JC took his shirt off and told the guy OFF..
This is going great so far! *reads next chapter*
Author's Response: I love your reviews, they make me smile. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I love hearing from my readers and what they think!
Hi! :D *waves wildly*
I have been scanning this story for the past few days and haven't had the time to review, but now I do! AHH!
These lines here: JC Chasez. Fucking JC Chasez is sitting next to me and talking to me. What do I do? What. The. Fuck
OMG! What would I do?? I would be like Ari..LOL
I also like these lines here: Looking like a total creepy stalker girl that wants to have his babies? Will become a check if I don't get my ass in gear.
HA!
Oh! and I also like how you described his hands, my mind seriously went to the gutter..lolz
So far, this story is getting good! I'll review more when I get the chance.. :)
Nice to meet you, well not in person, but here I mean..lolz Ok I'll stop rambling now..tee hee..
Author's Response: OMG! I ♥ your detailed review! If you liked that description of his hands hurry and read all the way to Chapter 8&9. Be prepared...;)
Author's Response: OMG! I ♥ your detailed review! If you liked that description of his hands hurry and read all the way to Chapter 8&9. Be prepared...;)
Author's Response: Teehee. Happy you enjoyed it!
Author's Response: Teehee. Happy you enjoyed it!
Author's Response: *bliush*
Author's Response: Loving that you're loving the story! Check out the new chapter!
keep them coming... :D
Author's Response: Check out the new chapter and thanks for reviewing again! :)
Author's Response: Your wish is my command ;)
Gah! Cliff hanger much??
Really adorable how JC worked his way around getting her a new camera without having to use his money to pay for it *sigh* :)
Author's Response: You can stop hanging on to the cliff now, nextg chapter is up ;)
Author's Response: Mwahahahahahahaha! ;) Working on the next chapter now.