i love that you included a link for her outfit!
ace is such a great character and i'm really enjoying getting to know her more through her interactions with her family and friends. i can't wait to see whta happens when she (naturally) makes the band!
“I swear, that thing would shit a data brick if it actually had feelings.”
LOL!! I know JC's just being pragmatic, but dude, don't be a buzzkill! :D
Author's Response: Haha, even I kind of hated having him be all serious at the end.
Author's Response: Yeah...it was hard not to tell you that. haha. Just keep reading ;)
Well, I must say, this story perks my interest very much. It's very nicely written, especially the dialogue, and it's good to read something that doesn't focus so much on Justin for a change (no offense to him, you understand).
Looks like I have the honor of being the first reviewer, too. Sweet!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked the opening of the story. :)