Btw, I liked that you have little snippets of what's being said in the chapter at the beginning. It makes me so excited to continue reading more.
Anyway!
"You guys don't have to--" Before JC could finish his sentence the three dancers quickly vacated the room, leaving him and Casey alone. "--go." He looked at her and laughed. / Yes, JC. Yes, they do in fact have to go.
Hmm, I'm interested in seeing more about this Tony character. I know very little and I still don't like him. haha.
Update whenever you can. I'm really enjoying this.
Author's Response:
re: the snippets...i totally stole that from missm. she did that with one of her stories (a thin line, i think?) and i LOVED it! so thank you...and thank her! LOL
It was good to see some of Casey's family. Her little brother was cute with his shift into excitement when he heard she was going to be on break soon as well as his shift into dissappointment.
Great story.
Author's Response: thank you so much! i hope you continue to enjoy it.
"He probably wants to bang it out again." Loved it!
Great update. I really liked the interaction between the guys, it feels genuine and realistic. I also like that Casey is a little complicated and not straight out "I needed you to rescue me" type of girl.
Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
jazz is a witty girl! LOL
i really appreciate your feedback. i'm always nervous about writing group interaction because they *are* real people and I want to at least somewhat make the dialogue seem somewhat authentic. as for Casey...complicated is a good way to describe her. a little TOO complicated, maybe. :-)
So I just read all three chapters, and I still need more. I am extremely hooked. I'm really interested in Casey's backstory, and can't wait to see how more of it is revealed. Great writing.
Author's Response: thank you so very much for the feedback! i'm slowly but surely editing and proofreeding so hopefully it won't take me too long to get all of the story up. i hope you continue to enjoy it!
Author's Response: :-D
Author's Response: yeeeeah. i think they'll figure it out. ;-)
I admire anyone who can write sex scenes, as I so cannot! That was steamy! I hope things won't be really awkward between them now (for a different reason), and I await the inevitable when another member of the group discovers their little secret. Hmm... Who will it be I wonder?
Great chapter, can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
is it silly to admit that, thought I write them often enough, I generally struggle through the sex scenes? LOL that's why all of my visuals were written by request. I'm such a nerd. LOL
thank you again! chapter 3 is forthcoming...
Author's Response: no apologies necessary, my dear! I *so* appreciate you reading this! Thank you, thank you!
"Um, are you waiting for a written invitation?" she asked somewhat petulantly.
That made me chuckle out loud. Looking forward to another update!
