Of course you have been waiting for that moment to be alone with her JC, its so obvious.. ;)
Now, I laughed at this cause I can hear him saying these lines:
"Where are you going?" He asked sternly. "You. Back in bed. Now
HA! :D *happy sigh* to have JC take care of me when I'm not feeling well is just so wonderful, and everything else... :P
So far so good..I'll read the next chapters soon..nicely done though.. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you. :-) I think if JC took care of me when I was sick, I'd have people cough on me all the time! Haha
Josh decided to explore the house while Madison slept. He went into the living room and perused the photos sitting on the mantle above the fireplace. There were pictures of her with her parents, her friends, and a guy he didn't know. His heart sank.
JC, stop being so nosy..LOL But glad that Madison told him she wasn't seeing the guy anymore, and I like these lines here as well:
"He wasn't you." She whispered as she looked down at her feet.
"What was that? I couldn't hear you." Josh grinned as he stepped closer to her.
"He wasn't you. OK? There. I still have feelings for you.
Haha! I knew it! :D
THIS:
"Why? So you can feel better about yourself? Then what? Go back to Brunette Sugar Tits that kept you warm while my heart was being ripped out of my chest?" Madison attempted to get out of bed again.
Ooh! BURN! Wow! This is SO good though, alot of angst going on.. *reads next chapter*
Oooooh! This is intriguing..I'm liking it so far, I can picture this clearly in my head.. :D
*reads next chapter*
