Angel Jones (Anonymous) on Dec 28, 2014 02:22 am (
Chapter 10)
About time Justin has told Maggie how he feels. So surprised at her reaction though. Thought she might run off or something. UGHHHHHHHHH!!!! I want his father to just go away. Justin is the perfect guardian for Tyler. He can give him the love that he needs unlike Justin's dad. I hope Justin doesn't give in. His ass better fight for Tyler until he can't no more. PLEASEEEEE update soon.
MochaB (Signed) on Dec 26, 2014 12:30 am (
Chapter 10)
NO FREAKING WAY can that mother effer get custody of Ty!! There isn't even a word harsh enough to describe Benjamin. It's clear as day why Justin refers to him as Benjamin. That man is not a father in any way. Threatening his son like that...to take away the career his son deep down didnt even want in the first place but did it to appease Ben. Because he knew that man wouldn't accept anything less. That...ugh!! Justin really needs to turn that psuedo confidence into the real thing. If ever a time to do so it's now. He needs someone to truly believe in him and what he can do. Fay obviously does, but he needs someone else as well. Maggie of course. And I know she does. He needs someone else in his corner. The only reason Benjamin is trying to say Tyler would do better with him is cause Justin being partner. Well what if he decides not to become partner and quit being a lawyer? There are some things more important. Like family and having a career that truly makes you happy. And anyway justin bought that house with his money! And he is smart and capable of having a different career and making a wonderful living for himself and Tyler in his own beautiful home he's been in for years. Like Benjamin owns the world. He needs to be out in his place, and I think Justin needs to be the one to do it. Ugh. Upsetting Fay...that heartless prick. Ok I'm done now. Got me all riled up. Lol on a good note, Justin's complete confession...swoon. Swoon swoon swoooooon. Be still my heart. Lol he's just so sweet and unsure but he's sure of his own feelings and he just cares about Maggie so much, ugh...update soon! :o)
MochaB (Signed) on Dec 25, 2014 11:51 pm (
Chapter 9)
The dialogue between Fay, Maggie, and Justin was hilarious!! I could just see Justin about to have a mental breakdown at Fay's words. LOL Fay is an awesome sister. She's going through a very difficult time, but she's completely thinking about Justin and just wants to leave knowing that he will be happy and with a wonderful person to match his wonderful self. I love the interaction between him and his sister even though its hard to read cause I get emotional but you really see the love and care they have for each other in the midst of the arguing and Justin's sadness. The arguing itself is due to that deep love and care for each other. Anyway, yay for the kiss!! Maggie what you are feeling are things that you repressed cause you were in a sucky relationship with a jerk. Now you are free girl! Let yourself feel and see what's in front of you!! Lol his relationship with Tyler is so cute. On to the next chapter! :o)
MochaB (Signed) on Dec 25, 2014 10:38 pm (
Chapter 5)
My gosh. That chapter was hard to get through. I was almost bawling. Lol I don't personally know anyone with ALS but my football team is the Saints, and they have a player that was diagnosed with ALS a few years ago. His name is Steve Gleason. So he has shared everything with us, the fans and public, about his battle with the disease. And it is so sad to see how it affects him but he is also so inspiring. He And his family don't sugar coat things like its been easy, but at the same time he is always positive and just enjoying the time he has left with his wife, child, and family, and he continues to fight and stays hopeful that one day a cure will be found. And he communicates through the computer with eye movement, sending out tweets and stuff, and its just amazing. Anyway it just made me think of him and other families that are dealing with terminal diseases and I got all emotional. anyway, the chapter was written wonderfully.
AceofSpades (Anonymous) on Dec 24, 2014 04:06 pm (
Chapter 10)
Awwww, after a kiss like that, why can't things just run smoothly? Haha. Great chapter
Hollie (Signed) on Dec 24, 2014 10:11 am (
Chapter 10)
Please tell me that at some point in this story Daddy Timberlake is going to get bitch slapped. He thoroughly deserves it.
Keediluv (Signed) on Dec 22, 2014 06:14 pm (
Chapter 9)
You are brilliant my love!! This is the first fic I've read in a long time and I'm so glad it's you.
I'm all in my baby!
Ki
Author's Response: KIIIII I miss you! So glad you are reading my story this year!! Love ya!
Hollie (Signed) on Dec 22, 2014 05:53 pm (
Chapter 9)
Huzzah! And he cooks, too. Where do I get one?
*does not need any more fictional boyfriends*
Author's Response: He cooks he cleans he's amazing. I want one!!
AceofSpades (Signed) on Dec 22, 2014 03:52 pm (
Chapter 9)
Yes! An update! I'm so hooked to this!! And yayyyy they kissed. The ending had me reading as fast as I coud to see what woud happen next.
PS: I'm partia to Courduroy as well. haha
Author's Response: Im so excited that you are loving this! More soon!
Hollie (Signed) on Dec 21, 2014 06:09 am (
Chapter 8)
oooohhhh and there was a nice big chunk of story waiting for me when I logged in! You're an excellent Santa, FYI.
Author's Response: I'm flattered and honored to be writing this for you dear! xo
Angel Jones (Anonymous) on Dec 21, 2014 02:33 am (
Chapter 8)
I'm literally about to cry. Justin and his sister are so loving together even when they argue. When she dies, I already know I'm going to cry even though this is a fiction story. At least he'll have Tyler, and hopefully Maggie. He needs to confess to her he loves her. I already hate his family. They seem so unloving. PLEASEEEEE update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading this! I know...Fay's story is sad! More soon!
elle-miranda (Signed) on Dec 20, 2014 10:49 pm (
Chapter 1)
oh my goodness, girl. SO GOOD. i can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: yay! so glad you are enjoying!
MissM (Signed) on Dec 20, 2014 06:27 pm (
Chapter 1)
You always go all out and I totally love it!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
AceofSpades (Anonymous) on Dec 20, 2014 05:42 pm (
Chapter 5)
Awwww, poor Justin. You've got me on the edge of my seat.
Hollie (Signed) on Dec 20, 2014 04:34 pm (
Chapter 2)
It's a shame, really, that you weren't here to see the obnoxiously smug expression on my face when I realised I'd got you.
It's glorious as per your usual, lovely, more more more please :o)
Author's Response: So happy you like it so far! I wish I could have seen that expression on your face hahaha