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Hollie (Signed) on Jan 22, 2015 02:18 pm (Chapter 4)
Chris isn't the only one confused here. What the hell is going on? I demand answers young lady. Don't make me bring out the glare.
Author's Response: I don't accept demands :) Soon enough my dear! Thanks for reading!
Author's Response: I don't accept demands :) Soon enough my dear! Thanks for reading!
Nikki (Anonymous) on Jan 22, 2015 07:21 am (Chapter 4)
My interest is definitely piqued, as I'm not sure what is stopping this grown man from being in his life. Definitely growing more and more curious. Glad to see that there is still a friendship/love between them. Update soon.
Author's Response: You will find out soon enough :) Thanks for reading!
Author's Response: You will find out soon enough :) Thanks for reading!
god gave me style (Signed) on Jan 22, 2015 12:46 am (Chapter 4)
Very interesting... I figured JT just ran off but not the case. Great update, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks! Not exactly... but you'll see learn more about the reasons soon! :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Not exactly... but you'll see learn more about the reasons soon! :)
MochaB (Signed) on Jan 21, 2015 10:22 pm (Chapter 4)
Ok I need the next chapter like yesterday! Chris isn't the only one that has questions. Lol what in the world happened? Why isn't Justin part of his life? Why couldn't he be a father to Chris? Why are they on good terms with each other? It seems like it was a situation that wasn't necessarily Justin's or Mac's fault. Like some outside forces forced it or something. But of course I don't know. Only you do. That's why I need the next chapter stat cause I need all my questions answered. Lol can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon! :o)
Author's Response: haha thanks for the review! You'll learn more about what happened soon... but not quite yet :)
Author's Response: haha thanks for the review! You'll learn more about what happened soon... but not quite yet :)
god gave me style (Signed) on Jan 18, 2015 10:50 am (Chapter 3)
"Are you one of those hippie kids?" made me snort, lol.
Author's Response: Ha, thanks for reading and reviewing! :)
Author's Response: Ha, thanks for reading and reviewing! :)
AceofSpades (Signed) on Jan 18, 2015 10:01 am (Chapter 3)
Awww, the chapter is over. I love their banter, it flows so well and it's so realistic. I loved their music conversation.
I can't wait for more. The diction and syntax in this story is incredible and keeps the reader wanting more. Awesome job.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying it!
I can't wait for more. The diction and syntax in this story is incredible and keeps the reader wanting more. Awesome job.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying it!
d_simplicity (Signed) on Jan 14, 2015 08:42 pm (Chapter 2)
Oh boy, this is good. I laughed so much. haha Very nice. Curious to see the gaps between their relationship from where it started to now.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! You'll definitely see all the gaps! :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! You'll definitely see all the gaps! :)
MochaB (Signed) on Jan 14, 2015 03:35 pm (Chapter 2)
Whoop!! So happy and excited to see a new story from you! I always enjoy reading your stories. The dialogue is always so good and so funny. I'm really loving this so far. Macy's meeting with Justin was incredibly humorous. I can't wait to read more about their past relationship and how it became what it is today. And although I don't know about those "high class" neighborhoods in California, an organic veggie sale sounds sadly realistic. LOL update soon!! :o)
Author's Response: Thanks, you always leave such thoughtful reviews!
Author's Response: Thanks, you always leave such thoughtful reviews!
Hollie (Signed) on Jan 13, 2015 01:31 pm (Chapter 2)
The worst thing is, I can just picture certain people who probably would suggest organic vegetable sales.
Author's Response: haha sadly true!
Author's Response: haha sadly true!
ialwayzbesingin (Signed) on Jan 12, 2015 10:12 pm (Chapter 1)
So I died laughing at the "organic vegetable sale" and the rest of the chapter was just fucking genuis. I love this. I love this more than I've loved any story that's come out here in a very long time. Thank you so much for writing it. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Well jeez, you sure know how to make a girl feel special! Thanks so much, I'm so glad you like it! :)
Author's Response: Well jeez, you sure know how to make a girl feel special! Thanks so much, I'm so glad you like it! :)
DiamondDoss (Signed) on Jan 12, 2015 09:47 pm (Chapter 2)
Okay I so LOVED this chapter and want more. And this...
“I’ll tell you what. You can pick out any vegetable you want and I’ll cook it for dinner.The freedom!”
“Wow, an early birthday present!”
“Am I the best mom ever, or what?”
That sounds like me and the 8 year old. LOL He would say that to me.
Author's Response: ha, thanks! I love that Chris and Mac sound like you and your son!
“I’ll tell you what. You can pick out any vegetable you want and I’ll cook it for dinner.The freedom!”
“Wow, an early birthday present!”
“Am I the best mom ever, or what?”
That sounds like me and the 8 year old. LOL He would say that to me.
Author's Response: ha, thanks! I love that Chris and Mac sound like you and your son!
AceofSpades (Anonymous) on Jan 12, 2015 07:39 pm (Chapter 2)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Chris sure wants that iPhone! :)
Awww, Christopher is adorable. I loved how he kept bringing up iPhones, thats such a kid thing to do. I love his character already.
And I was thinking the exact same thing about the organic foods sale. I'm so glad you updated. Awesome chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Chris sure wants that iPhone! :)
god gave me style (Signed) on Jan 08, 2015 12:51 pm (Chapter 1)
Another reason for me to hate guacamole! God, that sounds just awful to have gaucamole eye, lol! Anyway, this is adorable. I need more, pronto!
Author's Response: How do you hate guacamole???? But besides that, thanks for the reading! haha
Author's Response: How do you hate guacamole???? But besides that, thanks for the reading! haha
Nikki (Anonymous) on Jan 08, 2015 08:41 am (Chapter 1)
Aww this is adorable, excited to see where it goes.
Author's Response: Thank you, dear!
Author's Response: Thank you, dear!
Hollie (Signed) on Jan 08, 2015 03:56 am (Chapter 1)
On strength of the guacamole incident (which, hahahahahahahaha) I am going to let your woeful neglect of my reading needs slide. Love ya boo
Author's Response: haha I knew you'd appreciate the guacamole incident! I have the whole story mapped out so I'll be filling your reading needs for awhile ;)
Author's Response: haha I knew you'd appreciate the guacamole incident! I have the whole story mapped out so I'll be filling your reading needs for awhile ;)
