I LOVED IT! So cute, really enjoyed everything, it was unique and thoughtful. For someone who doesn't primarily write JC fic, you did so great.
Thanks again!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it. It was fun writing JC and I'm already thinking of ideas for more stories about him. haha.
So creative! I LOVE the way you incorporated my prompt words. I did not imagine the pizza and the candles in this way AT ALL. Which is soooo awesome!
It's getting sexy...I was kinda thinking of the whole Ghost thing with the pizza dough...ahem. Your fault since you mentioned Sexcapades and JC in the same chapter. Shame on you...
Love it!
Author's Response: Hee hee hee. I'm glad you're enjoying it. We're getting to the end.
Aw cute!
I'm fantasizing about a whole lotta other stuff than building a fort with him ;)
Love it!
Author's Response: Haha, I don't balme you.
I'm so sorry I didn't read this earlier! For some reason I didn't get an email saying there was an update! I've been busy writing too, you should have an update for your story in a couple days.
Anyway, I LOVE how you described her in his pj's. SO cute, plus how cute is he that he lent them to her?
Looking forward to more! :D
Author's Response: No problem. Glad you're enjoying the story so far. :)
Author's Response: Sorry, thought I already resonded to this. I love writing Maxine and she and JC together are just so much fun to write.
Of course you know it JC, thats how you charm girls and lure them into your trap..that we all LOVE for some reason.. LOL
But I agree though, JC was just being nice and wants to bring Maxine to a hotel, of all places.. ;)
Would like to see where all this goes, nicely done!
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for the review.
Still LOVING it!
I really like the BFF relationship between Max and Laura. It feels believable and fun.
I was FREEZING the whole time she was debating going or not, come on girl!You're soaking wet and a sex god is being nice (offered to text a pic of his DL to her friend, nice touch!). Get a move on!:P
“I’m doing this for your mom you know.” Best. Line. Ever.
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I love writing Laura and Max. Honestly, I think it's the easiest part of writing this story. Hoping to have the next chapter up soon.
THIS:
"You’re heading out?” the bartender asked, taking his empty shot class, setting it down on his side of the wooden table top. He lifted a damp rag into his hand and started to clean off a beer glass. “So soon?”
I REALLY thought that the bartender guy was trying to flirt with JC! ROFL
But the girl that walked into the bar, that must be Maxine am I right?? I can't read the next chapter now, but I'll find out soon enough..this story looks good! :)
Author's Response: Haha, I didn't even intended for that with the bartender! Glad you're enjoying it. Yes, it is Maxine. :)
"I'm doing this for your mom.." LMAO
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it. Hoping to have the next chapter out sooner.
I need to steal this line and use it.. my muses just chuckled at me and shook their heads "Come on, Goldilocks, we’ve got some bears to hunt for".
Author's Response: Haha, go right ahead. I laughed out loud when I thought about it. I'm glad you're enjoying it.
you know what's REALLY not fair? that you ended the chapter there!! :-D
Great start! I can't wait to read what happens next with JC and Maxine. Also? You're doing a terrific job with these JC stories!
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I get so nervous writing for a new NSYNC member but I'm glad you're liking it so far! :)
I get a multi-chapter story?! Woo!
I am really liking it so far. I totally was thinking dirty before I finished the sentence about the first Valentine leaving her for a girl with a bigger box of chocolates...lol...turns out it was a litteral box of chocolates...
Funny moments too with the grape allergy discovery!
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Yes! You get a multi-chapter story! Yay, I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far! I was so excited to see that I was writing for you! :)
