Comments For The Beach House
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Jun 02, 2015 12:25 pm (Chapter 1 - As told by JC and Liv)
More, more, more!



elle-miranda (Signed) on Jun 02, 2015 10:20 am (Chapter 4 - As told by Joey, Chris, JC, & Kate)
oh, Kate, way to distract JC with sex. i do NOT like the idea that she's hiding something from him.  i also don't like how easily Chris was able to plant a little seed of doubt into JC's mind. i'm looking forward to Justin entering this picture. should be...very interesting! 

Author's Response: Justin shall speak next. Don't worry ;)



elle-miranda (Signed) on Jun 02, 2015 10:16 am (Chapter 3 - As told by Chris, Liv, & Justin)
wow! why does Chris hate Kate so much? and wtf Justin?! the way you've written about what's going on between Liv and Chris...I feel it on a spiritual level. that feeling of watching something major in your life just kind of crumble, while everyone around you is going on, oblivious and happy. i'm loving this!



elle-miranda (Signed) on Jun 02, 2015 10:09 am (Chapter 2 - As told by Koren and Kate)
ok, so far i'm just loving the way you're establishing all of their connections. how they met, who's closest to whom and all of that. this is great!



DiamondDoss (Signed) on May 27, 2015 12:44 am (Chapter 3 - As told by Chris, Liv, & Justin)
Oh wow...Is it bad I sort of hope Chris and Liv don't work out. Because...well, they are both being mean to one another. And Justin..wow. I want more. WRITE MORE!! I loved it.

Author's Response: I'm so glad!! More coming soon :)



creativechaos (Anonymous) on May 26, 2015 07:36 pm (Chapter 3 - As told by Chris, Liv, & Justin)
I think...you need to write more. Right. Now.

Author's Response: Haha! Your wish is my command. Soon.



Me (Anonymous) on May 05, 2015 05:28 pm (Chapter 1 - As told by JC and Liv)
This story has me on the edge of my seat I want to know what happened to Lance I want to learn more about the group of friends.

Author's Response: Keep checking back! More coming in a few :)



DiamondDoss (Signed) on May 05, 2015 01:44 pm (Chapter 1 - As told by JC and Liv)
Interesting start. I can't wait to see where this goes. I like that there is underlying tension and that not everyone gets along. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks, Mel! Glad you're enjoying it :)



creativechaos (Anonymous) on May 04, 2015 11:53 pm (Chapter 2 - As told by Koren and Kate)
I love this story, even though Lance is NOT in it (well he's in it but I can't say the "d" word lol)...I love the comraderie between all of them. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thanks!! That means a lot coming from a Lance fan ;)



creativechaos (Anonymous) on May 04, 2015 02:08 pm (Chapter 1 - As told by JC and Liv)
Aaaaaaand I'm hooked. And now I'll be bugging you every time you're in chat to write more! lol

Author's Response: LOL I'm so glad! More on its way soon :)



Andrea (Anonymous) on May 01, 2015 12:06 am (Chapter 1 - As told by JC and Liv)
I really want to see where this goes! Please update!

Author's Response: Update coming soon :) Thanks fo reading!





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