TeamChasez (Signed) on Jun 21, 2019 06:19 pm (
Chapter 9)
Beautiful. Beautiful. Beautiful!! Absolutely loved this! It was amazing from start to finish.
elle-miranda (Signed) on Jun 11, 2015 06:25 pm (
Chapter 9)
aww, their reunion was perfect. i loved the way you finished! it's really great to have you here on the site and i hope to read more from you soon!
LadyX (Signed) on Jun 06, 2015 01:59 pm (
Chapter 9)
Nice close out! Hope you keep writing stories for the site!
Author's Response: Thank you! I have received wonderful feedback. I was considering posting more, and you may have just convinced me to do just that! I greatly appreciate your comments. :)
AceofSpades (Signed) on Jun 06, 2015 09:30 am (
Chapter 9)
"Abby wasn’t angry. She wasn’t making demands. She wasn’t crying any longer. She seemed totally calm and in complete control. JC wished he could say the same for himself."
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LOOOOOOVED that part. Finally caught up. I'm really enjoying this. Great job.
Author's Response: Thank you so very much! I'm glad you enjoyed this one. :)
LadyX (Signed) on Jun 04, 2015 08:16 pm (
Chapter 4)
You tell her JC. Sit yo ass down, girl!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all of your comments! I have just posted the final chapter. I do hope you've enjoyed reading this. :)
LadyX (Signed) on Jun 04, 2015 08:14 pm (
Chapter 8)
Aaaaah. Who is he?! Can't wait for more!
LadyX (Signed) on Jun 04, 2015 08:09 pm (
Chapter 7)
C'mon, why are they both being so difficult! Just both say what you both want to say!
LadyX (Signed) on Jun 04, 2015 08:04 pm (
Chapter 6)
Aw. I love how he asked her if her sandwich was ok. It's two pieces of bread and peanut butter...well we do know that our JC isn't much of a cook IRL. Lol!
LadyX (Signed) on Jun 04, 2015 07:55 pm (
Chapter 5)
Wake up! I want to know who he is too!
LadyX (Signed) on Jun 04, 2015 07:51 pm (
Chapter 4)
You tell her JC. Sit yo ass down, girl!
LadyX (Signed) on Jun 04, 2015 04:23 pm (
Chapter 3)
Poor Abby! I hope she's okay. I kinda don't want to feel bad for JC since he was such an asshole to her, but I do.
LadyX (Signed) on Jun 04, 2015 04:13 pm (
Chapter 2)
Sheesh, what an asshole. Curious to find out what lead to all of this!
LadyX (Signed) on Jun 01, 2015 07:29 pm (
Chapter 1)
Sooo...you totally piqued my interest. Incredible writing. I really like how you tied in the song in your title and the story. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words. I'm very flattered. I hope you enjoy the remaining chapters as much. :)
elle-miranda (Signed) on May 31, 2015 05:30 pm (
Chapter 6)
I can't wait to see how they resolve this! Who was the man, and why was Abby kissing him! Aaaah!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying the story! The answer is soon to be revealed!
Pumples (Signed) on May 30, 2015 10:50 am (
Chapter 1)
Welcome to the archive! I'm so glad you posted and have jumped straight into a challenge!
Great start to your story. I hope these two can work through their problems as they must've been pretty happy together to have been contemplating marriage. I wonder what happened to make it all fall apart. Can't wait to find out!
Author's Response: Thank you for the welcome and for the sweet review. I'm about to update, so I hope the story holds your interest until the end. :)
