Comments For One Night
LadyX (Signed) on Jun 14, 2016 07:21 pm (9)
My turn to squeeees! So excited you're sharing this story again.
Author's Response: and i'm so excited that you are my beta and that you've been enjoying this one as much as i've been enjoying writing it. thank you!
Author's Response: and i'm so excited that you are my beta and that you've been enjoying this one as much as i've been enjoying writing it. thank you!
Alysen Blaine (Signed) on Feb 18, 2016 10:10 pm (8)
Ok, JC saying "honey"...yes, he says it all the time. I think the same thing! I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story so much!!!!
Author's Response: ewww! i hate when authors don't reply to comments and this one was left a million months ago. i'm sooooorry!! also, when he says honey, i melt. squeeeee! thanks, love!
Author's Response: ewww! i hate when authors don't reply to comments and this one was left a million months ago. i'm sooooorry!! also, when he says honey, i melt. squeeeee! thanks, love!
LadyX (Signed) on Feb 16, 2016 05:40 pm (8)
I'd have to look back at my previous reviews but I think they probably all start with "GAH I LOVE THIS STORY". Just something about the inner voices and the flow of everything just makes me...freaking love it. You deserve every single nomination!
Author's Response: as i just said to alysen, i HATE when authors don't reply to comments, and i didn't even reply to the one from my beta. gah! i suck sometimes. <3 thank you for continued encouragement and support. you rock, lady! thank you thank you thank yoooooou!
Author's Response: as i just said to alysen, i HATE when authors don't reply to comments, and i didn't even reply to the one from my beta. gah! i suck sometimes. <3 thank you for continued encouragement and support. you rock, lady! thank you thank you thank yoooooou!
alee_92 (Signed) on Jan 19, 2016 09:15 am (7)
Oh please update soon!
Author's Response: I just did! thank you for reading!! :D
Author's Response: I just did! thank you for reading!! :D
jjazz59 (Anonymous) on Dec 15, 2015 11:27 am (1)
I haven't read anything on here for awhile. I really am enjoy your story. I hope you update soon. I love the dynamic between JC and Reese!
Author's Response: well welcome back, and thank you!! i'm working on an update...so hopefully i'll have something for you soon. thank you again for reading--and your kind words! :D
Author's Response: well welcome back, and thank you!! i'm working on an update...so hopefully i'll have something for you soon. thank you again for reading--and your kind words! :D
LadyX (Signed) on Nov 12, 2015 06:12 pm (7)
Yummy, yummy! Got confused for a sec because I forgot how far back from the most recent chapter I was. Took me a sec to realise some stuff hadn't happened yet lol!
Author's Response: haha! it's the best part about being the beta, right?! getting to read it all eeeeaerly! <3
Author's Response: haha! it's the best part about being the beta, right?! getting to read it all eeeeaerly! <3
Alysen Blaine (Signed) on Nov 07, 2015 08:32 am (7)
Um. I love this. All of this. I love how it was told from two separate view points. Keep writing. This is by far one of my faves!!!!
Author's Response: xoxo thank you, lady! <3
Author's Response: xoxo thank you, lady! <3
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Nov 06, 2015 07:42 pm (7)
While I enjoy the dual POV I don't like reading the same conversation twice. I don't intend this to be taken in a negative light, but as constructive criticism. I love your writing, but I feel like that aspect could be improved.
Author's Response:
Author's Response:
since you posted anonymously, i'm not sure that you'll read this. (and if you're a member of the archive, you don't have to hide behind anon to say something ~constructively critical~ in the future.)
thanks, i guess? i mean i'm 7 chapters in, and it's been a conscious stylistic choice to repeat parts of the dialogue, from Reese's and then from JC's POV. i appreciate that you don't like it, but it's the way i've chosen to write and i don't intend on changing it. while i also appreciate you complimenting my writing, this may be something i write that you just end up not enjoying. and that's totally ok.
thanks for reading up to this point.
KrisB (Anonymous) on Sep 07, 2015 04:46 am (6)
Fabulous! I like how they met and flirted. Two consenting adults doing what feels good. I hope there's more and that JC finds a way to stick around or keep in touch. Keep it up!
Author's Response: aaaand...the plot thickens. ;-) hope you're still enjoying!
Author's Response: aaaand...the plot thickens. ;-) hope you're still enjoying!
AceofSpades (Signed) on Aug 19, 2015 08:13 pm (6)
I thought I reviewed this already. Anyhoo, LOVED IT. Yeah right, JC isn't smooth. Haha, great chapter.
Author's Response: thank you! LOL i think JC is going to prove to be...not that smooth. ;-)
Author's Response: thank you! LOL i think JC is going to prove to be...not that smooth. ;-)
DiamondDoss (Signed) on Aug 04, 2015 08:08 pm (6)
This was soooooo hot!!
Author's Response: i was a bit worried, since i typically write pretty graphic scenes, that this would be lacking. so thank you, doll!
Author's Response: i was a bit worried, since i typically write pretty graphic scenes, that this would be lacking. so thank you, doll!
Alysen Blaine (Signed) on Aug 04, 2015 01:39 pm (6)
Oh sweet lord that was hot without even revealing much. Ohhh more please, sister girl!!
Author's Response: thank you, love! i hope to have more up very, very soon! ;-)
Author's Response: thank you, love! i hope to have more up very, very soon! ;-)
AceofSpades (Signed) on Jul 14, 2015 06:38 pm (5)
Yay, an update. But booooo it stopped there. Haha. Update whenever you can.
Author's Response: LOL well the good news is, the next chapter will be up soon!
Author's Response: LOL well the good news is, the next chapter will be up soon!
AceofSpades (Signed) on Jun 25, 2015 09:56 am (4)
Author's Response: i heard the song and was like...YESSSS! thanks for reading!
"Fuck. Maybe I'm just drunk."
HA! Yeah, maybe. Great song choice. It really does fit here.
Author's Response: i heard the song and was like...YESSSS! thanks for reading!
