Alysen!!! I have returned after such a long hiatus and now I am catching up on what I've missed and diving intor your stories. This is one is SO perfectly smutty and clever! Love!!
So I came online only for a minute since I'm supposed to be writing...but when I saw the title to this I couldn't avoid it!
Yummy! Talk about an eye for an eye. Well actually a...well you know ;). Good job! Happy you posted!
HOLY SH*T THIS WAS FREAKIN FANTASTIC! SO HOT AND JUST WOW..I have no other words to say, the plan that Loren had with JC was off the hook, mind-blowing sex is SO RIGHT! Especially if its with freaking JC..even hotter.
Love the way you described him here: He stood there on the other side of the door dressed in a white t-shirt and jeans. Loren took in his scent as he walked past her after greeting each other. He smelled amazing to her
YES, the way his jeans grab in all the right places.. ;) ahem..anyways, moving on.
I'm so glad they went on with this plan though, these lines here at the end, a total slap in the face:
Justin was putting his things away in the bedroom and came back into the living room. He saw Loren’s familiar handwriting on the note.
“Hey babe,
There’s a video for you to watch from JC and I for you and Aiden.
You fucked with us, so we fucked with you.
Loren.”
I"m like YES! Awesome job though, fantastic story, I needed my JC fix..LOL :D