“It'll get easier,” JC tells me in a warm, comforting voice and I have to swallow hard before I can speak. He has one of those voices that makes everything he says sound so reassuring. He could tell me the moon is pink and I'd want to believe him. “You just need time.”
Yes JC does have a comforting voice...
Now sorry for your heartbreak... :( Go listen to "Kelly Clarkson: Since U Been Gone..." such an awesome song.. :D
And go watch cute puppy videos... :) *hugs*
Author's Response: Thanks hun. I've taken your advice and already I feel better 😊
I’m sorry you’ve been going through a tough time lately, matey. It’s amazing how much writing can get off your chest, and I was pleasantly surprised to see another story from you on the “Most Recent” list.
To the story itself—very vivid descriptions, especially with the emotions. You’re spot-on when describing the emotional state of someone who’s in a big slump and sees no easy way out. You also do a great job at showing what it’s like to be in love with the wrong person. Sometimes you want to make it work, you’re so sure that it can work if you just give it time and effort, but some relationships are like water and oil: they’re simply never going to work.
I’d say this is the golden quote: “Don't settle for a guy who needs time to realise you're special. There'll be someone out there who notices it straight away.” That’s how you know it’s real love, when you don’t even have to think about it.
Well done, matey, as usual, and I hope you’ll be okay yourself.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! It's so true that writing out your feelings helps to understand them, as I am sure you've found at times as a writer yourself. Not easy to always put yourself out there, but I am glad I got this all off my chest. As always, thanks for your support and and encouragement and taking the time to review! :)
"I want one of those. A Justin with a heart," Chris says in a higher than normal pitched voice.
Joey snorts. "I'm still up for tossing him in the Hudson."
Okay after the two doofuses have had their say. Yeah, I cried. I HATE those voices of reason that tell you how it is. And you have to swallow it. Mad hugs, girly. Love ya and loved this.
Author's Response: Sorry Chris and Joe, didn't mean to cause you a load of grief there. I'm so glad you liked it. You know how much I struggled to get back into writing, but I'm glad I pushed through regardless. Thanks for listening to me whine and being the REAL voice of reason these past weeks. 😊 (*whispers to J * just keeping up the pretense, honey.)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. It was challenging to get started, but after that it just kinda formed on its own. Thanks for taking the time to review.
Author's Response: *sobs* thank you!
