Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to review as well as the welcome. I'm glad you enjoyed the story as well as the ending line! I have an idea for another story as well as extending this into five pieces to show her relationship with each boy. Who knows what'll happen! :)
Welcome back to the archive! I'm so glad you've posted and I have to say I really enjoyed reading this.
“Are we sure he hasn’t finally gotten his period? I mean, those eyelashes...”
Right! Why are long lashes wasted on men? Ha ha. I also loved the bit about the gut bomb. You really had the group banter down and the underlying concern for each other. Great job! I hope to be reading more of your work soon!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you agree with me, if I could have as long lashes...haha
It's good to hear that you liked the jokes as well as that I got their banter down right, I was really nervous about that one. Thanks for taking the time to review!
:)