Alysen Blaine (Signed) on Feb 17, 2016 08:45 pm (Chapter 1)
LOL! I so enjoyed reading this! Great job! Looking forward to reading more of your stuff :)



Anonymous (Signed) on Oct 12, 2015 03:17 pm (Chapter 1)
This was really funny. You have the boys' personality down pat. I especially loved the end. Good job.



Sammy (Anonymous) on Oct 12, 2015 11:22 am (Chapter 1)
This was a greaet one-shot! I loved the banter between the guys, it was very much like them. I like Cadence!



elle-miranda (Signed) on Oct 10, 2015 10:18 am (Chapter 1)
Haha! I love the ending line!! Welcome to the Archive! I'm so glad you shared a story with us. I'm looking forward to reading more!

Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to review as well as the welcome. I'm glad you enjoyed the story as well as the ending line! I have an idea for another story as well as extending this into five pieces to show her relationship with each boy. Who knows what'll happen! :)



Pumples (Signed) on Oct 10, 2015 07:50 am (Chapter 1)

Welcome back to the archive! I'm so glad you've posted and I have to say I really enjoyed reading this.

“Are we sure he hasn’t finally gotten his period? I mean, those eyelashes...”

Right! Why are long lashes wasted on men? Ha ha. I also loved the bit about the gut bomb. You really had the group banter down and the underlying concern for each other. Great job! I hope to be reading more of your work soon!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you agree with me, if I could have as long lashes...haha

It's good to hear that you liked the jokes as well as that I got their banter down right, I was really nervous about that one. Thanks for taking the time to review!

 :)






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