Comments For Love at First Bite
theusagirl (Signed) on Oct 31, 2015 12:35 pm (Breakfast Burrito)

Aww YAY! :D This was adorable! And had just the right amount of sweetness.. I want avocados now...lolz

These lines here:  He’d rolled his -very beautiful, mind you - blue eyes at her and then had accompanied that with a cute, crooked apologetic smile.

Yes those blue eyes..and AJ?? Pssh please..nobody wants to see his black painted fingernails, he's not THAT attractive...LOL

Great story though! Oh BTW Happy Halloween! Have fun and be safe! :) 



Author's Response: Lol! I just thought it was a cute way to slide in a little boy band comedy in there. Happy you enjoyed it!


KrisB (Anonymous) on Oct 28, 2015 08:50 pm (Breakfast Burrito)
LOVE IT!! So sweet and totally captured JC in my opinion.

Author's Response:

Thank you! I always try to add little JCisms in my story to make him feel morereal to me. Happy people notice!

 



AceofSpades (Signed) on Oct 28, 2015 10:57 am (Breakfast Burrito)
Awww this was too cute. I'm glad she wanted the oversized shirt thing, I've always liked seeing that as well. Great job.

Author's Response: I really liked that idea too, it was fun to write. Happy you enjoyed it!


Alysen Blaine (Signed) on Oct 27, 2015 07:27 pm (Breakfast Burrito)
Dayum I'd keep that sweater, too!!!!! Nice ;)

Author's Response: Right?! Thanks for reading it.


DiamondDoss (Anonymous) on Oct 27, 2015 01:06 pm (Breakfast Burrito)
I loved this!!!! Love love love 

Author's Response: Thank you!!


elle-miranda (Signed) on Oct 27, 2015 12:42 pm (Breakfast Burrito)
I love love love love love love love it!! (and I would've written love a couple dozen more times if it wouldn't have been uber obnoxious.) SQUEEEEE! this is so perfect ... not that I expected anything less from you. :D :D :D my grin is large and I may or may not have squealed (or squee'd) aloud. thank so so so so so much! perfeeeeection!

Author's Response: Awwwww....I'm so glad you liked it! :D




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