Love it! Hoping you do an update! 🤞
Author's Response:
I see you're reading my stories! Thank you, and thanks for the reviews!!! I have had writer's block forever, but I really want to get back into it! Crossing fingers!
Oh shit! That was so good, can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thanks for all the reviews! I'm hoping to get something out soon!
I really like it. Jax is so cute. Kinda broke my heart to hear JC think of himself as a C-list celebrity though
Update? Please!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! It convinced me to post a one shot with these characters :)
Author's Response: I may have just listened to it a few days ago and pondered a few things. ;) Archive is waking up?
Author's Response: Thank you! I am trying!
Can Beats PLEEEEAAAAASSSEEE get punched or kicked or something soon??
Also...I love seeing where this is going. Great job, Sonia!!
Author's Response:
Thanks Aly! Beats will get a good talking to I'm sure...
Author's Response: Thank you, that's what I aim for when I write him...though I'm sure it's romanticized a little...hahha. Thanks for the review and welcome to the Archive! If you need anything let us know!
HAAAAAA! i love the title! it's perfect and i SWEAR i can see him looking just like you described in that last scene.
considering what each of them is feeling/thinking about the other, i'm just really excited to see them get closer.
i'm also really excited to see jax punch beats in the throat. that's an option, right?
Author's Response: Totally an option...we'll see what I can do. I didn't know what to name the chapter but then I thought that would be funny. So...who do you think will make the move first? Hmmmm? Thanks for always reviewing even though you already read and comment before anyone else reads it!
Lol. These 2 are cute. I like their budding relationship. Can't wait for more.
And Beats needs a swift smack across the face. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! More coming in a while but I will focus on Story of my life for a bit too. But I'll keep in mind the drop kick to Beats as you're the second person to suggest it....lol. Thanks for the review!
gimme JC in swim trunks!
the last bit hurt, on behalf of them both. i might be more offended at the comment from beats about JC, but i knew it was coming, and you wrote on behalf of both of them, and each hurt was shown, even if was in jax's pov.
and can I have JC (in swim trunks) get anywhere near my neck? you've put this thought in my head and now it won't leave
Author's Response: You see what I did there? I seared that in your braiiiiin. ;) I know that hurt, for both of them, so I'm glad you felt it too. I wonder if they'll be able to repair it soon? More to come!
Author's Response: Thanks for the ice cream ;). I'm happy you're enjoying my version of JC. More to come!
so i have to admit that one of the disadvantages to being a beta is also one of the perks: i know some of what's coming next, so when i leave a review i have to be careful of not letting my future knowledge cloud my judgment of the current chapter. all that said...
jc, jc, jc. that was a slick little sexy move what with the neck kiss and the not so subtle hint of 'yeah, i totally hit that.'
beats got a little...wow. i feel really bad for jax because his reaction, while i knew he wouldn't be happy, was not what i expected.
cannot wait (no, seriously, i'm impatient as hell) for the next chapter. GET TO WRTING!
(and thanks for the image of ice cream, hot day, and jc in swim trunks. my thoughts went in a very...sticky...direction.)
Author's Response: Wasn't he sexy? And I think it was nice of him to give her a way out at the moment at his detriment no less (looking like a random hook up). Anyway I will get to writing and you'll get your fix...lol. Sticky ice cream melting all over JC? Omg...not going down that rabbit hole right now.
