Comments For All I Ask
LadyX (Signed) on Jul 25, 2016 11:07 am (Chapter 11)
She used his song! I wonder what that did to him. We'll see I guess.

Author's Response: LOL.  It was a ballsy move on her part.  As I mentioned not too long ago on Twitter, this was the song that inspired me to turn my story into a fanfic.  I'd been torturing myself with my writing and came across the song on YouTube again after many years.  A whole world of ideas hit me when I heard it again.  I had to work the song into the story.  :)



Nerdily Ingenious (Signed) on Jul 25, 2016 03:47 am (Chapter 12)

I can't be the only one who let out a 'finally' at these two being intimate with each other. But it was a win, because her mind and body were finally able to connect and enjoy the moment with him.

I honestly didn't know what to think about JC's reaction at the ending of the last chapter, but now it makes sense. There's still so much to uncover, but we're getting there and it makes me all the more intrigued to know about her.

That ending.... I had a feeling, still, I'm interested in that story. It plays a major role in the how she is unable to be alone with herself.



Author's Response:

I'm pretty sure I too let out a 'finally' and I'm writing the damn thing.  LOL.  I wanted a good foundation and build up to the moment it happened.

As for the ending, I swear you live in my head!  Hahaha.  You're very perceptive.  Thank you for the review. 




Sweetdreams32 (Signed) on Jul 23, 2016 03:47 pm (Chapter 12)
This is getting so good!!! I can't  wait for more!

Author's Response:

:)  I'm glad you think so.  I have the next chapter mostly written.  Just doing my tweaking.  My OCD gets kinda outta control. :/

Thanks for the review!  




Morgan (Anonymous) on Jul 17, 2016 11:36 pm (Chapter 11)
Falling in love with this story, keep up the awesome work!

Author's Response: Aww, that means a lot to me.  Thank you!  Glad you're enjoying.  I appreciate the review.  :)



MissM (Signed) on Jul 17, 2016 11:11 am (Chapter 11)
Well now... what crawled up his behind??? Must know MORE! 

Author's Response: Lol!  More coming very soon.  Making tweaks to the next chapter.  :)



Alysen Blaine (Anonymous) on Jul 16, 2016 09:18 pm (Chapter 11)
Great job! Keep it up :) 

Author's Response: Thanks lady!  More coming soon.



Sweetdreams32 (Signed) on Jul 16, 2016 06:37 pm (Chapter 11)
Omg..... I can't wait!! 

Author's Response: Lol, you won't have to wait too terribly long.



Nerdily Ingenious (Signed) on Jul 12, 2016 11:40 pm (Chapter 10)
Finally, these two are getting somewhere. Charlie gave a hell of a lot in my opinion, but it seems to me that her mind and body are not connected. She's way more willing to have sex with JC than to reveal anything about herself, and that's telling. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Charlie did give a lot but there is still move brewing under the surface.  I love your observation of her and you're hitting the nail on the head.  She tells herself she's going to talk to JC but always finds a way out.  She obviously has issues with confrontation.  More revealed soon.  Can't give too much away here.  :)  Thanks for the review! 



LadyX (Anonymous) on Jul 09, 2016 11:21 am (Chapter 10)
Love the words of the song. Perfect for the story. I enjoyed your update!

Author's Response: Eeeek!  Thank you!  I fretted over the lyrics for days.  I almost decided to cut it from the story.  Glad you enjoyed it.  Hopefully I can post more soon.



ComplicateMe (Signed) on Jul 08, 2016 09:17 pm (Chapter 10)
Finally found the time to read the last two chapters...I am so fixated with the story and where it's going.  Love all the layers Charlie has and the progression of the storyline is super believable.  Kudos and can't wait for the next installment!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  Sometimes I get a little OCD on details and I have to reign myself in.  Lol.

I appreciate the review and that you're liking the story. 




Sweetdreams32 (Signed) on Jul 07, 2016 04:34 pm (Prologue)
I just wanted to say that I am enjoyed this story so much. I love how this story portrays the lovable And affectionate Jc. I'm getting addicted to this story!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Yay!  I'm glad you're enjoying the story and getting addicted.  For the most part, I envision JC as lovable and affectionate but I can't promise he will always be like that.  He is a guy after all and they have their moments.  LOL!  :)



LadyX (Signed) on Jul 04, 2016 06:26 pm (Chapter 9)
Great to get the background pn Charlie. I hope she tells him soon so she can free herself from the guilt. Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: You're welcome.  Definitely more secrets to come soon.  Will JC be able to handle all of them?  Hehehe.  I'm kinda evil.  :)



MissM (Signed) on Jun 30, 2016 06:50 pm (Chapter 8)
I don't read many stories here much lately but I am enjoying this one! Keep it coming!

Author's Response: Oh my gosh!  Thank you!  It means a lot that you like my story.  I have read through nearly all of yours and you are an incredible writer!  I hope you continue to enjoy!



LadyX (Signed) on Jun 29, 2016 01:24 pm (Chapter 8)
I LOLed at the situation he needed to take care of. I liked getting more background on Charlie. I enjoy the build up of emotion between them and look forward to when they finally get together.

Author's Response:

Hahaha, I'm glad you like his little dilemma he needed to fix.  They will for sure get together.  Very soon.  ;)  And more background on Charlie as well.   




Anonymous (Anonymous) on Jun 28, 2016 09:50 pm (Chapter 8)

SO MANY QUESTIONS!

 I'm really enjoying this story.



Author's Response:

LOL, I know!  I promise they will be answered.  I hope I'm revealing things at the right pace so people stay interested.  The next chapter will give a little bit more.  :)

Thanks for reviewing! 






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