Comments For All I Ask
Heidiseuss (Signed) on Jul 16, 2021 03:58 pm (Chapter 14)

I love this story.  I need to know what is going to happen next.  You female led is very compelling.  Feelins like I am watching Virgin Creek or something.



Kikilein (Signed) on Oct 18, 2020 11:49 pm (Chapter 14)

I need to know moreeeee!!!!



Kikilein (Signed) on Oct 18, 2020 11:08 pm (Chapter 12)

Oh wow. I had a feeling it was something more than a marriage she was grieving. Great job. Super hot chapter, too. 



Kikilein (Signed) on Oct 18, 2020 10:43 pm (Chapter 11)

Oh no why did he freak out? By the way I love all the songs!



Kikilein (Signed) on Oct 18, 2020 10:20 pm (Chapter 10)

Great chapter. I love how confident JC is in his abilities haha. 



Kikilein (Signed) on Oct 18, 2020 08:42 pm (Chapter 8)

I love that JC reads fanfic! I would die if he ever read mine lol. Your is amazing though



Kikilein (Signed) on Oct 18, 2020 08:07 pm (Chapter 7)

I love it



Kikilein (Signed) on Oct 18, 2020 07:46 pm (Chapter 6)

U love how you have written JC, he is wonderful. I am loving Charlie, too. 



Kikilein (Signed) on Oct 18, 2020 10:10 am (Chapter 4)

I did think it was Matt! My God what an amazing scene before they were interrupted.



Kikilein (Signed) on Oct 18, 2020 03:08 am (Chapter 3)

Oh wow I am loving this



Kikilein (Signed) on Oct 17, 2020 05:24 am (Prologue)

Wow, well I'm hooked



Dreamingtilthisday (Signed) on Oct 13, 2020 03:42 pm (Prologue)

Omg! 4 years without an update. I hope you plan to update 🤞😜

Loved it all. Binged read all 14 chapters 💙💙💙💙



Nerdily Ingenious (Anonymous) on Aug 08, 2016 02:31 am (Chapter 13)
I feel like a giant dork because as SOON as I saw the beginning of those lyrics, I immediately went and played the song. It is my absolute favorite Whitney song. However, it's the perfect song to explain the current situation of JC and Charlie's relationship. Brilliant. It was a sweet moment. He let her into his safe haven and welcomed her by allowing her to partake in what made it his safe haven.
I think I'm getting a feel for Charlie's secret, but I can't seem to wrap my head around why she thinks JC would end the relationship with her because of it. Maybe it's not what I think it is after all....
Random, but I love the description of the interior of JC's home. I'm HGTV TRASH and I was just like, 'YASSS HIGH CEILINGS WITH BEAMS! THE ISLAND AND STAINLESS STEEL!', lol.
Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response:

Well if you are a ginat dork then so am I.  LOL.  I am a ture believer that you can tell your life story through a series of songs.  I think director Cameron Crowe is a genius because of the way he takes amazing songs and strings them together in his movies to tell the story of the characters.  Anyway, I went off on a tangent.  I agree that the Whitney song describes Charlie and how she tries to put on tough front but inside she suffers from so much insecurity.

I think I have dropped enough breadcrumbs throughout the story to show most of what she's hiding.  Now it's a matter of her spilling it all the JC and how he will react.  Can he handle someone so broken from their past?

I too love HGTV which is probably why I got super descriptive on the interior.  LOL. 



Sweetdreams32 (Signed) on Aug 04, 2016 01:21 pm (Chapter 13)
I can't tell you enough how much I love this story! Very excitied to keep reading!

Author's Response: Why thank you dear!  And I can't tell you how much I appreciate that you're enjoying my story.  I'm trying to keep on track with updating weekly.  More on the way soon.  Thanks for the review!


LadyX (Signed) on Jul 25, 2016 11:28 am (Chapter 12)
There it is. Revelations! Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: Yay for revelations!  More of them on the horizon.  Thanks for reading as always!




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